Confused

by steve1223adelaide, South Australia

Nov 2011 458 Views 6 comments

Confused

This mind of mine goes round and round
My goodness what a mess it's in
When I think left it goes right
And right is something else
It's getting so bad I don't know
Who or what I am
When I stand up my bum's on the chair
And sitting my backs on the ground
I'm so hungry that I need to sleep
But first I'll drink a steak
I'll have it with shoes served on a sheet
And maybe some pickled mice
Oh dear me I'm so confused
My mind is all in a whirl

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Posted: Nov 2011

About this poem:

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Comments (6)

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 15, 2011

Yes, definitely, you seem a little bit confused

Nice to read Steve

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandNov 15, 2011

So dear Steve, be careful 'coz when you laugh, it can mean you are crying and vice versa, or when you talk it might mean you're asleep, or your shoes might walk ahead of you.

Thanks for this amusing write!

Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 15, 2011

Confused by: steve1223
I many a time sit on confused and never get the message..when I often think I should :)
fun write steve.I enjoyed reading