Life.....Inside a box, or, is it two? Wondering....Just which is which of me, Who is who? Brittle silence, the heavy velvet cloak of night, The stillness....Massive, Deprived of sight, A....Different kind of dark.... Do you feel it too?
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
Imagine suddenly being in more than one place at once....lol....Andrew...xxx
very cool write my friend, while reading and trying to imagine the impossible, made this very thought provoking lol, ty
cheers my friend
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 4, 2012
Your theory has been vindacated Andrew..I just saw you in the reflection of a window pane..but then the window pane just saw me in the reflection of you. Who is who and what is what ..heh my friend.?
seerieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaAug 10, 2012
and YOU !!!Andrew dear one..... THE POET. the KINDEST of all!
Comments (12)
Good one Andrew glad to see you FLOATING around
Superposition stops at the moment of observation; so, please, open that box!
lol !
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you Know You are a Brilliant gifted POET
it must feel so satisfying to be perfect! (i really mean) Perfect.
every poem of yours every line every word just Perfect
cheers my friend
the KINDEST of all!