There are times when I ask myself What is this life that I’m living Each day from one to the next They all seem to run together
No happiness, no joy, just pain And none of it was my doing First a disease, one that is so rare Just one in ten or so million
Body is wracked with terrible pain My limbs being slowly twisted In the end I know I’ll die But I could still live til ninety
If that’s not enough, things got worse A car the footpath mounted Crushed my legs, lost them both And killed my wife, my lover
But still I live, I don’t know why I refuse to give up, surrender So next time you moan how tough it is Spare a thought for me, the life I’m living
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
I saw a man the other day who was just a torso on a wheel chair. It got me to thinking ... we are so easily ready to complain as to how hard we have it yet the truth sometimes is actually the opposite ... maybe we need to focus on the positive things in our life ... there are always people that are worse off than we are ... count our blessings
How are u doing Steve? Superb write and i am with you. Its so easy to get down on ones self or complain but there are so much worse out there and i bet a lot of the worse complain less.im not saying people shouldnt vent or express ourselves, i do in writing but i am saying stop and think about it. Regards........jesse
I can't agree more with what you say in the footnote. We need to be reminded of such things from time to time cause we tend to forget that there are suffering people all around. Compassion is the right word for denoting what we lack in our hectic life. Even if not knowing the reason why he lives he refuses to give up - great tenacity, better we take example from this good man. Many thanks, dear poet, glad to see you posting!!!
freedom64eastwood, Nottinghamshire, England UKMar 17, 2013
but for....there go I
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 18, 2013
Nice one Steve and so very true, I live by a saying that out on the golf course no matter how bad you are playing you can always guarantee that somebody is playing worse!!. Rob
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Poetnumber1
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madtat29
marikia
freedom64
for all your kind comments
Rob