As the sea carries horizontal rain pelt'd beside me on the window frame All the feet I've seen en-toe'd in the sand each wave's taken out past part of time
Candle'd flame chair's under me crossed knee's fingered smoke lookin out to a world the drops of rain covered wet I shake out the flame wooden match it held to
Whistled kettle in the kitchen tea for two splat'n rain on the window from one candle two flames some black tea an me....~
:) ty Redex i'm glad you found the tranquility in it, I was reflecting on a moment of a good friend of mine how I thought it would be looking out the window of his flat in his time space:)
Neostylites_, IranNov 15, 2009
Despite all the coziness, relaxation, and peace, I cannot overlook the loneliness visualized so masterfully through objective correlatives.
Thanks Mick for bringing up to the surface. Too many times the good poems are buried by flooding. This was before I was on CS - so is a fresh read for me! Sounds so peaceful and content in the cozy abode! Also - remember the song "Candle in the Wind" by Elton John? This song popped into my head reading this!
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Thanx Bentlee...your very insightfull. JG
Kathy