Candle in the Window

Strike the match

As the sea carries horizontal rain
pelt'd beside me on the window frame
All the feet I've seen en-toe'd in the sand
each wave's taken out past part of time

Candle'd flame
chair's under me
crossed knee's fingered smoke
lookin out to a world the drops of rain covered wet
I shake out the flame wooden match it held to

Whistled kettle in the kitchen
tea for two
splat'n rain on the window
from one candle two flames
some black tea an me....~



~Bentlee~
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Posted: Nov 2009

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amahlala
Warm and happy Bentlee..good one!bouquet
Bentlee
Hi girl, hope ur ok an life's good. Ty.
amahlala
Life has been very good to me!hug
Bentlee
Sweet an deserved for you, you go girl:)
Bentlee
Be a sweet place to be:) huh do ya agree:) lol
amahlala
It's got water, candles, warmth...excellent place to be!thumbs up
Bentlee
Happy ur safe an well:)
andrew149
thankyou bentlee, really nice, this one, a very cozy picture indeed, can feel the relaxation oozing out of it........andrew
Redex
Ty Bentlee, lovely and warm and calming readteddybear
Bentlee
Thanks Andrew, an yes a very peaceful relax that felt good to write:)
jazzy75
bentlee - shinning bright my friend...lovely poem :-)
Bentlee
:) ty Redex i'm glad you found the tranquility in it, I was reflecting on a moment of a good friend of mine how I thought it would be looking out the window of his flat in his time space:)
Neostylites
Despite all the coziness, relaxation, and peace, I cannot overlook the loneliness visualized so masterfully through objective correlatives. handshake
Bentlee
Ty Jazzy as I was sitting in a me moment with all silence around and truly loving the moment:)
Bentlee
Ty Neo an yes it could be seen in a loneliness fashion, yet it's a peaceful time shared alone and truly enjoyed for that time:)
luvuluvme2
very peaceful and calmingsnowed in
Bentlee
Ty luvu, an I like the man in the window effect, sweet:)
jerseygirl49
I love to watch the rain ,wonder why water is so soothing? Very nice picture you painted here. Thanx Bentlee.wave wine applause
jerseygirl49
Of course that is it!!
Thanx Bentlee...your very insightfull.professor wine JGwave
Bentlee
That came to me after a near drowning experience Jersey Girl. When the peace sets in is where it made sense of the water attraction to us all. Ty:)
godsprincessonline today!
Thanks Mick for bringing up to the surface. Too many times the good poems are buried by flooding. This was before I was on CS - so is a fresh read for me! Sounds so peaceful and content in the cozy abode! Also - remember the song "Candle in the Wind" by Elton John? This song popped into my head reading this!

Kathy teddybear
Bentlee
Ty Mizz so true your words, certainly a new world we live in, self reflection is truly a means of how to reflect the coming future within.

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