your way...........

it was just a few words
to see where you were at
you've been holed up in your room
very little did we chat
i needed to clear the air
about a few things
tiptoeing around issues
and the responses that it brings
but you opened up to me
in such a different way
my ears intent
on the words you had to say
you looked at me squarely
and with a softness did surprise
spoke of your views
exposing no disguise
and as i listened my pride grew
for now i understand
the strength of your character
as you become a man
my fears alleviated
no more concern need there be
the path that you walk
is your destiny......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
I was really concerned that my boy was mixing with the wrong crowd .........he believes lifelong friendships should not be put aside because they choose to do the wrong things.......... i thought he would be misled instead his influence is actually making them look at what they are doing.........

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JEANIEMAC
It's amazing when your child becomes your friend.
niah9
Strength of character.....in a wonderful poem....yes....usually taught as a child...asserts itself in youth to maturity....you must be proud of him and yourself too....the other Kathy.....teddybear
Nuwahri61
Hi Jeannie.......still have a long way to go.......Thanks for your thoughts ....Regards Nu grin
Nuwahri61
Thanks Kathy .........appreciate your thoughts .........be even more prouder of him when he starts finding his own way in the world he he ....regards Nugrin
darkhorse555
such a powerful piece speaks volumes dear friends excellent pen god blessangel grin
Nuwahri61
Hi Darkhorse........Thanks mate appreciate your thoughts ........regards Nugrin
SCatlyn
Great poem... and great start for your son. It is so often the bad seems to end up influencing the good... But what a wonderful revelation for you to see! (Was going to say, now you can relax... but prob. more accurate to say you can relax a bit... as there's still a ways to go, and it's a tough old place out there in the world.)

Lots of work... but very rewarding. It was also very rewarding to read your poem!

teddybear

Cat rose
Nuwahri61
Hi Cat .....Yeah his response surprised me and takes a load off my mind that's for sure ........Thanks for your thoughts...... Regards Nu grin
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