a silver dawn dresses the eastern sky a beauty of which I can not deny a blanket of grey as far as I can see discolours the sun and hides it's identity a whispering breeze kisses my skin as distant birds begin to sing I feel a stillness so profound and ponder on this silent ground rare is the day that calms the soul that peaceful way to make me whole I wish this magic on distant shores bless the people who can open their doors never to worry about their day ahead only to appreciate nature instead........
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Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
one of those rare mornings where I feel the earth is at peace with itself.........
I live inside the city, so the peace of nature is hard to see. It's still there, but the glow of the lights make it hard to see the stars. I do live next to a golf course, so if I really want to see the stars I can walk about two minutes and get a much better view.
Hi SG .......Peace is the ultimate ........Thanks for your thoughts ........Regards Nu
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJul 14, 2015
Blissful NU,soothes the soul.My birds and flowers in the garden bring me peace now and again we go to enjoy the sunrise or sunsets at the beach and I drink in as much as I can of the wonder of nature.I love it when we drive around the countryside and I get so lost in the scenery even though my spouse tries to break in with continuous chatter.You have drawn the reader to enjoy this bliss.
Very quiet, peaceful and soothing time of day when most of the world is still asleep. Sunrises, sunsets and rainbows are 3 of God's most wonderful gifts to us. Beautiful poem - thank you for sharing.
Hi Paloma.......Thanks .....i'm glad you liked it .......It's not hard to appreciate the amazing beauty of NZ .......I was absolutely stunned when Kathy showed me around ...........Regards Nu
Comments (15)
A classic write, capturing the beauty of Nature.
Your imagery and smooth flowing rhyme is great.
Best Regards!
could feel this so beautifully
Peace is wonderful indeed!
Have a beautiful day, Nuwahri61
Kathy
Phil.