silver dawn

a silver dawn dresses the eastern sky
a beauty of which I can not deny
a blanket of grey as far as I can see
discolours the sun and hides it's identity
a whispering breeze kisses my skin
as distant birds begin to sing
I feel a stillness so profound
and ponder on this silent ground
rare is the day that calms the soul
that peaceful way to make me whole
I wish this magic on distant shores
bless the people who can open their doors
never to worry about their day ahead
only to appreciate nature instead........
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Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
one of those rare mornings where I feel the earth is at peace with itself.........

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socrates44online today!
Nu

A classic write, capturing the beauty of Nature.
Your imagery and smooth flowing rhyme is great.
Best Regards!
beautifulyou
great write Nu
could feel this so beautifully happy place
mcradloff
I live inside the city, so the peace of nature is hard to see. It's still there, but the glow of the lights make it hard to see the stars. I do live next to a golf course, so if I really want to see the stars I can walk about two minutes and get a much better view.smitten
Nuwahri61
Hi Socrates...Thanks for your kind words ......always appreciated .......Regards Nugrin
Nuwahri61
Hi BY.....Thanks grin
rusticbink
Nice job..
Nuwahri61
Thanks Rusticbink.......much appreciated .....Regards Nugrin
soulgoddess
daydream joy gotta go

Peace is wonderful indeed!

Have a beautiful day, Nuwahri61
Nuwahri61
Hi SG .......Peace is the ultimate ........Thanks for your thoughts ........Regards Nugrin
paloma66
Blissful NU,soothes the soul.My birds and flowers in the garden bring me peace now and again we go to enjoy the sunrise or sunsets at the beach and I drink in as much as I can of the wonder of nature.I love it when we drive around the countryside and I get so lost in the scenery even though my spouse tries to break in with continuous chatter.You have drawn the reader to enjoy this bliss.thumbs up bouquet
godsprincess
Very quiet, peaceful and soothing time of day when most of the world is still asleep. Sunrises, sunsets and rainbows are 3 of God's most wonderful gifts to us. Beautiful poem - thank you for sharing. angel

Kathy angel2
reguiny2006
Hello, A lovely poem beautifully written, enjoyed it so much.
Phil.
Nuwahri61
Hi Paloma.......Thanks .....i'm glad you liked it .......It's not hard to appreciate the amazing beauty of NZ .......I was absolutely stunned when Kathy showed me around ...........Regards Nugrin
Nuwahri61
Thanks Godsprincess........Definetly a great time of the day.....thanks for your thoughts .....Regards Nugrin
Nuwahri61
Hi Phil ......Thanks mate ....much appreciated ....Regards Nugrin
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