Spirit Guide

by caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England, UK

Apr 2010 438 Views 8 comments

Spirit Guide

I am there in the dark of the peace of the night
I am part of the dawn's soft hush
I am part of the light of the daybreak sky
As I sigh at the rush hour rush
I dance in the dust of the morning light
I rest in the dark of the deepening night
I am there in the warmth of the nigh high sky
And I sit on a cloud when the heaven does cry
I am a beam of the sun on a dazzling day
Healing the Earth, showing you the way
I am there in the thunder when the skies are torn
I am a flake of snow when the winter is born
I am part of the wind sweeping the plain
I am there in a drop of the tingling rain
I am always with you.

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Posted: Apr 2010

About this poem:

For Michael, my main guide.
I know it is repetitive and rhymes but they are fun to write in this way and are best read from the heart, not the intellect.

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Comments (8)

NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKApr 17, 2010

Wow! Beautiful yet again.

caroljoyceOPManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 17, 2010

I have been looking at some of your interesting writings. I am glad we seem to get along as I would not like to get on the wrong side of you!

PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAApr 17, 2010

Caroljoyce,
Lovely poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing.

cassy213cavan, Cavan IrelandApr 17, 2010

amazing poem my aunt died last week .you have put a tear in my eye.i will think of her each time it rains,snows.please keep writing

caroljoyceOPManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 17, 2010

AAh, the last thing I wish for is to make anyone cry! I tell you, nobody 'dies'-this is just illusion. She lives on but in a differing form. It is a bit like two films being shown simultaneously.
Psychic poet x

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAApr 18, 2010

C.J. - no need to apologize for the repetition that's a vital part of what makes this a good poem...the message is the other. Nice work! Hope it was as fun to write as it was to read.

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandApr 19, 2010

Lovely flow of words,I like it,"I am a flake of snow when the winter is born".....