a hint of salted air penetrates my nostrils closer that I become, the more it's presence grows stronger fast appearing about me are pillows of sand awakening memory, shouldn't be too much longer
facing a highest, final dune, blocking the horizon my faint heart quick to beat, for I know what is in store at last reaching the summit, my breath in sudden escape as my eyes now behold...beauteous sea and it's shore
magically impelled, I find myself running down, down, to the crashing waves, splashing their mist knees turning to jelly, my mind is now racing with my face and my spirit, to be first, sea kissed
I release myself to the swell of the ocean float down to the bottom....oh please swallow me for I wish to be one, with all the dead sailors let my salty tears mix among they of the sea
just goes to show it's always greener on the other side. i feel the same way 'bout your mountains. A swell write hedi...stay away from Davie Jones though ...arg... ;-)
i remember as a kid running out of control down a hill-reminded me of thatnsomehow....coola boola....
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMay 12, 2010
Brilliant, I truly enjoyed this one, also very original way of presenting..., and, I liked the fact that this one has depth, leaves us thinking, one can find many hidden layers, for example, the journey down to the sea mirroring our life-journey to our final destination...???, I'm sure there's lots more... I for one, feel, that a poem must have undercurrents in order to pique interest and to be enjoyable... Thanks...
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKMay 12, 2010
Great words Hedi.
hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USANov 7, 2010
re-entering salty dog-sphere...seems a common denominator lately
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 7, 2010
hedi, that feeling you captured so well...sea kissed. it's a fine, fine write. this pirate nods in approval. aye.
gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandNov 7, 2010
i warmed to this immideatly, as i love the sea, loved the seaside as a child, still do, magically written, hedistuff, ''and the sailor home from the sea''
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