sailors way

a hint of salted air penetrates my nostrils
closer that I become, the more it's presence grows stronger
fast appearing about me are pillows of sand
awakening memory, shouldn't be too much longer

facing a highest, final dune, blocking the horizon
my faint heart quick to beat, for I know what is in store
at last reaching the summit, my breath in sudden escape
as my eyes now behold...beauteous sea and it's shore

magically impelled, I find myself running
down, down, to the crashing waves, splashing their mist
knees turning to jelly, my mind is now racing
with my face and my spirit, to be first, sea kissed

I release myself to the swell of the ocean
float down to the bottom....oh please swallow me
for I wish to be one, with all the dead sailors
let my salty tears mix among they of the sea
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2010

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agoodguy2have
just goes to show it's always greener on the other side. i feel the same way 'bout your mountains. A swell write hedi...stay away from Davie Jones though ...arg... ;-)
Ladybee42
i remember as a kid running out of control down a hill-reminded me of thatnsomehow....coola boola....applause applause
Earlgreytea
Brilliant, I truly enjoyed this one, also very original way of presenting..., and, I liked the fact that this one has depth, leaves us thinking, one can find many hidden layers, for example, the journey down to the sea mirroring our life-journey to our final destination...???, I'm sure there's lots more... I for one, feel, that a poem must have undercurrents in order to pique interest and to be enjoyable... Thanks...
jazzy75
Sail on my friend...nicely writtencheers
caroljoyce
Great words Hedi.
hedistuff
re-entering salty dog-sphere...seems a common denominator lately
Gashly
hedi, that feeling you captured so well...sea kissed. it's a fine, fine write. this pirate nods in approval. aye.
gotitall
i warmed to this immideatly, as i love the sea, loved the seaside as a child, still do, magically written, hedistuff, ''and the sailor home from the sea''
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