my mark

agoodguy2have

by agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia, USA

May 2010 396 Views 7 comments

my mark

Author: agoodguy2have

i'm here for you
word for word
can you hear me now
quietly i put my mark
small and inconspicious
right here for you
to take and hold tender
at the very end
my signs of mind spill
to screen and page
this little dot
a thought period .
that's me you see above

© agoodguy2have 2010-05-14

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Posted: May 2010

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Comments (7)

hedistuff

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAMay 16, 2010

one of these days you can explain this to me....at the end of it all, there will you be? . a period? a dot? well if you're gonna be a . then I wanna be an ' a slashing dashing figure, oh wait...that's a hyphen...I DON'T WANNA BE A HYPHEN! I wanna be an apostrophe, I just want to hang around and covet stuff...

gnj4u

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAMay 16, 2010

Hi, agoodguy2have,
Now, you've gone and done it! You've left your mark on Poets' Corner - and it's certainly NOT a dot! Thank you for sharing.

trurorob

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMay 16, 2010

now i might Question Mark that!!
rob

caroljoyce

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKMay 17, 2010

I understand this perfectly well and it is the same for us all. Beautifully put,I like the relative simplicity of this one.
'Look at me please'......

Pinkpoetress

PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMay 17, 2010

Another good one, GoodGuy!

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAMay 18, 2010

This one holds special meaning for me...thank you for sharing a wonderful, thought provoking poem :)

optimisticme

optimisticmeathlone, Westmeath IrelandMay 18, 2010

to be or not be,....a dot...that is my question mark ?

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