When I wrote this poem I never thought it would become as popular as it has, thank you so much for all your reads and I'm so happy you've all enjoyed it so much. Jon.
I took about an eight year absence from writing an this is the first one I wrote, I feel inspired by the results of it an shocked at the same time. Ty Jazzy for commenting and your words.
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 20, 2009
Beautiful poem Bentlee-so glad you found your way back to writing
Gypsy that makes two of us happy to be back writing. This one is my favourite so far, regardless of it's success. Ty for your comment, so glad you liked it.
LexSteelChaguanas, Trinidad and TobagoOct 20, 2009
lovely, very real, very well expressed i look forward to more from you, ty for the inspiration.
ty Qs, I'm glad it brings peace to you if only momentary, I find that as well with this write as i remember the day very that I wrote it. Cheers and hope you are well,
What a wonderful subject of poetry. I love those moments in time. That magical moment of make believe in my mind Now if I get one to step out of my dreams and into my life that would be nice
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thankyou
bless you
i didnt run away hit and run........
yes bentlee you are the mire
My Goodness what a wonderful poem... Great Title
Loved reading your thoughts in this amazing write
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx