My soul is on onwards and upwards flight past dancing particles motes of bright parting the clouds of deepest night seeking its path of searing light though rejection may wait through every door I sense much more I must endure though others rip and scorch my soul my inner being is strong and whole from torrents find shelter within my shell for only that without is hell and if I feel I can’t withstand I seek and answers touch my hand if I regret the years of pain well it’s in the stars, it’s in my name so once more I will agree to stay another heavy harmful day to show there is another way
So Earth Angels get your shirt sleeves rolled be ready for that which was foretold the long awaited amazing birth of a healed ,cleansed and mended Earth an end to pain and death and fear oceans running sweet and clear no soul shall be forsaken all helped gently to awaken.
carol, what a wonderful poem of positive vision and a good rhyme to boot! definitely not a "rejection may wait through every door", you got my vote on sentiment and style ;-)
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJun 5, 2010
Your style of writing is amazing,Your poems are full of depth,thank you for sharing this .
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKJun 5, 2010
Nice peaceful write and full of hope
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 5, 2010
Wonderful poem, of hope, spirit, acceptance and forgiveness and much more loved it, thankyou for sharing
caroljoyceOPManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJun 5, 2010
I just tell what is to be, precognition; glad you like it.
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