A late little note

Your love lived in every cell of mine
Our souls and genes still intertwine
loss of you nightmares crush my mind
no peace from them I ever find

When he scared you I felt your fear
if he came you kept me near
Protecting me from all his harm
his handsome anger, rage and charm

Such a little while together were we
just long enough to teach me, me
you taught me every word I said
the grief still screams throughout my head

In every way you put me first
gently corrected me at my worst
aware of your suffering waterless thirst
things left unsaid so full dam burst

Gone when I was so small and young
left out in the cold, my coat undone
by my beautiful, dreamy, temporary mum

You taught me all I know that’s good
would you know me now?
I hope that you would. x
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010

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Comments (12)

Ladybee42
hug lovely..
hedistuff
yeah...this is a wonderful poem. you are such a terrific writer...
paloma66
Such an amazing poem,such sweet thoughts of a mother.thumbs up bouquet
Pinkpoetress
Beautiful poem, Carol. So dear.
Redex
What a wonderful poem, and sad too,teddybear
agoodguy2have
wow Carol...makes me wanna cry, the beauty of your words, and you. Thanks for being an inspiration! ;-)
trurorob
good poem Carol!
rob
Blacksttud40
caroljoyce...its very heartfelt and beautiful...
sophiasummer
oh! caroljoyce!

silent tears fell as i read your writing, i could see and feel what you wrote, you are a beautiful passionate writer.angel bouquet
Ladyjj
hug
Like all have said before me..Beautifully written.
Thank you Carol..for sharing this with us.

Ljj wine
Earlgreytea
So hauntigly sad, so worthy of a 'poetry-pullitzer' if there's such a thing, you sure can write lady, thank you...
jazzy75
Haunting, beautiful, and sad...your poem contains a myriad of emotions. Truly remarkable my friend!angel
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