in your face

i can see it all in your face
the slight smile, left side crooked,
a chip off your maxillary central incisor
from that bicycle accident in fifth grade

the couple of grayed lashes over those
deep blue eyes that many brightly regard
striking-looking, with crows feet splayed
like windblown tears of joy, to temples

those pock marks on your forehead from
chicken pox when you were home that hot
Indian Summer for almost a week and
your Mom looked so worried and doted

there's a little blood now in the left
eye's white, probably from long nights
worrying about those that you love, more
than days squinting toward a paycheck

whether through a looking glass darkly
or silvered glass back at you, it's all
there, faces give it away, for a gaze
at all that has been you, up to today

© agoodguy2have 2010-06-30
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
here's lookin' at ya!

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Comments (9)

Redex
Loved poem g.guy but! what happens if you have a face lift???rolling on the floor laughing So sorry realy liked poem.peace
tomboygirl
touching somehow goodguy,I liked it..but wonder what you were feeling too..
freeatlast64847
Nice writee GG. History shows in ones face and much can be read there.
tinypixie
Fantastic. A picture/photo tells a thousand stories.
The camera,unless mnanipulated, never lies.
thumbs up
tinypixie
Fantastic. A picture/photo tells a thousand stories.
The camera,unless mnanipulated, never lies.
thumbs up
Blacksttud40
agoodguy2have...

its very very fascinating ... go ahead...

hug
Earlgreytea
Mature, satisfying, deep, descriptive, poetic, nostalgic..., well, why not, we're talking a 'Goodguy-poem' here..., it also has an alluring element of: "hey, there's more to this than first meets the eye..."
jazzy75
A form that is worth examining...this poem is more than skin deep :)thumbs up
jeddah12
applause I THOUGHT YOU WERE DISCRIBING ME HERE MY FRIEND,LOOOOL,cheers GREAT POEM SIRapplause WERE U STARING AT ME WHEN YOU WROTE THIScheers applause heart wings heart wings
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