i can see it all in your face the slight smile, left side crooked, a chip off your maxillary central incisor from that bicycle accident in fifth grade
the couple of grayed lashes over those deep blue eyes that many brightly regard striking-looking, with crows feet splayed like windblown tears of joy, to temples
those pock marks on your forehead from chicken pox when you were home that hot Indian Summer for almost a week and your Mom looked so worried and doted
there's a little blood now in the left eye's white, probably from long nights worrying about those that you love, more than days squinting toward a paycheck
whether through a looking glass darkly or silvered glass back at you, it's all there, faces give it away, for a gaze at all that has been you, up to today
Loved poem g.guy but! what happens if you have a face lift??? So sorry realy liked poem.
tomboygirllarnaca, Larnaca CyprusJul 3, 2010
touching somehow goodguy,I liked it..but wonder what you were feeling too..
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAJul 3, 2010
Nice writee GG. History shows in ones face and much can be read there.
tinypixiestoke on trent, Staffordshire, England UKJul 3, 2010
Fantastic. A picture/photo tells a thousand stories. The camera,unless mnanipulated, never lies.
tinypixiestoke on trent, Staffordshire, England UKJul 3, 2010
Fantastic. A picture/photo tells a thousand stories. The camera,unless mnanipulated, never lies.
Blacksttud40Colombo, Western Sri LankaJul 3, 2010
agoodguy2have...
its very very fascinating ... go ahead...
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJul 10, 2010
Mature, satisfying, deep, descriptive, poetic, nostalgic..., well, why not, we're talking a 'Goodguy-poem' here..., it also has an alluring element of: "hey, there's more to this than first meets the eye..."
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The camera,unless mnanipulated, never lies.
The camera,unless mnanipulated, never lies.
its very very fascinating ... go ahead...