waltzing on water
surface tension,
. too clear to mention
best stick to brevity,
. and go for some levity
but need to dig deeper
. to keep her
just the finger tips,
. forget the lips...or hips
alienation,
. be it self, or the nation
leaves us thirsty
. for joint creation
just drink deeply
. of life's libation
and join in a chorus song...
. the whole throng
we can say it again and again,
. to explain
I jus' wanna be your man,
. any way I can
we'll live together,
. for worse or the better
make our bed, lie in it,
. live and let, to permit
.
everyone to make known
. a love to the marrowed bone
rising, setting, spinning 'round
. dancing on the common ground
jigs, waltzes, ballets and squares
. laughs, cries, and double dares
wanting never to ever let go
. just to tell you that I love you so
© agoodguy2have 2010-07-12
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
sorry for leading dots, multi-spaces stripped, limitations. close as i could get.
Comments (13)
beautiful in depth likening of what shines out
your window is fully open,
and so, how serene....
rising, setting, spinning 'round
. dancing on the common ground
jigs, waltzes, ballets and squares
. laughs, cries, and double dares
wanting never to ever let go
I felt a feeling, of how love can enrapture
Your poem
leaves us thirsty
. for joint creation
just drink deeply
. of life's libation
it's great, full of rhythm and hope..