waltzing on water

surface tension,
. too clear to mention
best stick to brevity,
. and go for some levity
but need to dig deeper
. to keep her
just the finger tips,
. forget the lips...or hips

alienation,
. be it self, or the nation
leaves us thirsty
. for joint creation
just drink deeply
. of life's libation
and join in a chorus song...
. the whole throng

we can say it again and again,
. to explain
I jus' wanna be your man,
. any way I can
we'll live together,
. for worse or the better
make our bed, lie in it,
. live and let, to permit
.
everyone to make known
. a love to the marrowed bone
rising, setting, spinning 'round
. dancing on the common ground
jigs, waltzes, ballets and squares
. laughs, cries, and double dares
wanting never to ever let go
. just to tell you that I love you so

© agoodguy2have 2010-07-12
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
sorry for leading dots, multi-spaces stripped, limitations. close as i could get.

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Comments (13)

andrew149
Reads like yer in deep!....lol....Thankyou for a good read, Good Guy!.............Andrew.cool
sophiasummer
there was no dots to lead,
beautiful in depth likening of what shines out
your window is fully open,
and so, how serene....

rising, setting, spinning 'round
. dancing on the common ground
jigs, waltzes, ballets and squares
. laughs, cries, and double dares
wanting never to ever let go


I felt a feeling, of how love can enrapture
handshake wine
Redex
Loved this, sounds like a real fun love and in a light way of writting deep. greatteddybear
Earlgreytea
Original and entertaining as always...
caroljoyce
Mastery, wizardry. Maintain if walls fall down or Angels start to cry.
jazzy75
i'll drink to that! and perhaps even dance!! i just love how you wrote this one my friend.thumbs up
paloma66
"Only You", GG can write this way.thumbs up thumbs up applause wine
paloma66
"Only You", GG can write this way.thumbs up thumbs up applause wine
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Your poem
leaves us thirsty
. for joint creation
just drink deeply
. of life's libation
serpico12
really good piece of poetic work..enjoyed the read.
amahlala
It is a good waltz...and a good read.bouquet
tomboygirl
mmm...Romantic agoodguy..lovein it!teddybear
Ladybee42
can't believe i didn't comment on this yet...
it's great, full of rhythm and hope..
thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
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