there is beauty and violence here is there beauty in a hanging body? of course! the beauty of conviction the streets mean and rivers raging the people vanish in waves, torrents
can more be said as the innocent bake in deserts of desolation while shimmering mirage beckons with shade and cool water just ahead turning to oasis of redeeming reality
as senseless violence continues unabated whilst beatified altruism surrounds each villainous accretion of rock on heart that just won't end always another happenstance of will
a small boy helps his grandmother in any trivial way, gladdening then drowns in the afternoon pool fates, oh, the fates always stringing pulling this way and that, the lives of all the actors, some passion play
the part cast trivial or challenging when the angelic take center stage and say their eloquent lines, bringing the audience to its feet applauding the meaning of life it is after all a worthy endeavor and bowed, the grateful of accolades
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 9, 2010
I like this one GG, there is a lot of truth in it too......Thankyou......Andrew
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 9, 2010
All true in this write, meaning of life???? I know my own, but thats all
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKAug 9, 2010
Stunningly penned and love the intelligence and depth. Where you percieve balance, I see duality, thus different stance, happen.. I do feel the unrelenting harshness of destiny or fate, however.
Hi, agoodguy2have, when the angelic take center stage and say their eloquent lines...therein lies meaning-filled life and happiness in defiance of the streets mean and rivers raging. Accolades to the poet!
Brilliant write my friend...very thought provoking. I just love this line, "of rock on heart that just won't end"...you do know how to play the words to the max :)
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I do feel the unrelenting harshness of destiny or fate, however.
when the angelic take center stage and say their eloquent lines...therein lies meaning-filled life and happiness in defiance of the streets mean and rivers raging. Accolades to the poet!
all corners suffer
applauding the meaning of life
it is after all a worthy endeavor
and bowed, the grateful of accolades
Nicepiece
SS
rob
Great poems allow people to see many things and so it is with this one.