Have you ever felt, as you try to pick up your life and put it all back together,that all the pieces keep changing shape? That, though you are playing the game by all the rules, You seem to be continually losing? That, you are the odd one out as, what may seem to others as stupid or chaotic,can….of your life, good sense make? Worry not my friend! For…Fate never plays by the rules, and, rarely calls upon us at a time that is convenient, or of our own choosing.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Just thinking about......Stuff!......lol.....Andrew...xxx
very nice...great analogy...and in a way, another vision of what has become, recently, a common theme...I say recently, because of the number of poems lately of similar expression. But, this particular pose, the meaning of life, most probably outnumbers all others throughout the spectrum...in my opinion...
amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 13, 2010
Ah...Andrew...with the life I lead...I think about it all the time!
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 13, 2010
Another good write andrew, Yes I do believe we have all been looking inward a bit. I wonder if this theme is just infectious and has a knock on affect, as others seem to do, have you noticed?? Now what to choose, next part of your story
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 13, 2010
So true and very well written Andrew All has been said by Hedi & Redex.. Me..I would have take a few pages to hit the spot..you, spot on!
Ljj..
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKAug 14, 2010
Very insightful, Andrew.
andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 26, 2010
Thanks for the compliment Hedi, great to hear from you, sorry about the delay in answering......Andrew.
andrew, sorry 'bout the delay in answering??? how 'bout sorry 'bout the delay in readin'...it obviously slipped by me when i was doin'...sumthin...but hey...I'm not worried 'cause here I am and the puzzle pieces ...still FIT!!...if ya press on 'em...REAL HARD. ;-)
gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandSep 26, 2010
life isent hard pieces like a jigsaw, its fluid, just when you think you have the water channeled, it starts to flow in another direction, fate has our measure, we can taunt him, but he has won already, lovely read andrew,
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 3, 2010
i never worry about my life dear,i enjoy all everything about it...life is such but to be enjoyed..nice poem and thanks for sharing sir
Comments (10)
All has been said by Hedi & Redex..
Me..I would have take a few pages to hit the spot..you, spot on!
Ljj..
Yes
Thank you Andrew, I couldn't put that in words, you have...
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