at age four...she lost an eye but not a single person cried save for her for she's alone inside her head which is her home all around her world is crazed supposed persons are a maze how may she take one step ahead? with reaction to her filled of dread just a dark spot in their life her existence gives them strife every act of her's forlorn how they wish that she weren't born she stopped living there today yet she hadn't gone away searching for a place to hide she just locked herself inside now she's what they've always dreamed never heard, so never seen they're so happy she's withdrawn can stop pretending that she's gone
hedi, this write is more than a bump in the road, poetically, philosophically, metaphorically, and any other cally you can tag to it. that's why yer "the dude"...well ok, Jeff Bridges is "The Dude", but yer The Dude from W.VA. ;-)
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKJun 2, 2011
Hi hedi
All the previous comments are superb, I can't really add to their reponses. Quite simply... a very powerful write.
Best wishes
Bill
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJun 2, 2011
I had just written to a friend saying problems are a bump in the road...and I saw the poem.....wonderful write hedi.... told with great care.....so gentle....Niah
hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAJun 2, 2011
thanks for reading.....and that's right, jeff bridges is 'the dude'.......
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAJun 3, 2011
Hedi, Heavy and intense. I can understand this poem well. Thanks for sharing.
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and unwarranted fear. The greatest
cage is our mind isn't it?
rob
All the previous comments are superb, I can't really add to their reponses. Quite simply... a very powerful write.
Best wishes
Bill
Heavy and intense. I can understand this poem well. Thanks for sharing.