REMEMBER ME!

The two carved hearts are still there,
For now it seems, one is beating,
I just stand and stare,
Watching the other bleeding,
And the choir of twigs strike up a mournful note,
As the cold wind sings though the branches of our tree,
I pull up the collar of my coat,
Making it harder to feel, you see,
But, the rain still hits my face, mixing with the tears in my eyes
Both wind and rain,
Sounding like the shattering of promises, and heaving sighs,
Racking me with guilty pain.
Each drop stinging like a shard of glass,
I scream, “When can we be together again?
How many more times, must I, this way pass?”
And just as I turn to go,
In my minds eye, your smile I see,
I knew it would be just so!
And carried on the wind are your words,
“Darling,…….Be strong ……Remember me”
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
ahhhhhh!.......Just a poem from the dark side.....Andrew...xxx

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Billiegirl
You always write beautiful poem, wink I've read some and loved all.wine
niah9
That is a heartfelt write Andrew.....hope from the way back past.....not present, but well written and I really followed the painful journey.....niahangel sad flower
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
The pain of separation cuts deep with Each drop stinging like a shard of glass.
cafetwo2010
So sad but greatly expressed andrew. thumbs up
andrew149
Thankyou BG....Pleased you liked it....Andrew...xxxcool
Redex
Only you could write so Andrew, yes be strongteddybear
andrew149
Thankyou Niah, pleased you enjoyed it....though it isn't about me, again from a picture I have seen of a tree with love hearts carved in it.....So that was the inspiration for it.....Andrew..xxxcool
boyshchrm6
Great inspiration it was the carved hearts Andrew.
wonderfully worded and with such passion.
thumbs up angel cool cheers
kickit22
really enjoyed the read andrew but i don't know if i can remember you cause i'm trying to remember me.
andrew149
Thankyou gnj4u, Yes that is very true, pleased you liked it...Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
A grand compliment from you cafe two.....Thankyou...pleased you enjoyed the read.....Andrewcool
Earlgreytea
[the choir of twigs]

such an unusual phrase..., love it... thumbs up
swade777
Nothing dark about this one Andrew! An Awesome poem of a deep rooted love that time will never kill! I was really blessed by this one!!
andrew149
Of Course Redex...Always....Thankyou, very pleased you liked it too....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
thankyou Boychrm, a great compliment coming from you my friend....Andrew...cool
Odette67
I pull up the collar of my coat,
Making it harder to feel, you see,
But, the rain still hits my face, mixing with the tears in my eyes

And carried on the wind are your words,
“Darling,…….Be strong ……Remember me”


This is a superb poem, there is something haunting about the above lines, like an old black and white movie, the man with his collar up, rain mixing with his tears. It is quite a dark poem, dark is what I like. applause teddybear
andrew149
Hahaha well done kickit...maybe after you have had a good night's sleep hey....lol..Pleased you liked it...Andrew...cool
trurorob
Missed this one Andrew, good stuff!!
Rob
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