YOU

In pools of changing hue,
Rippling halo’s of reflected street lights,
Through curtains of rain,
Your eyes sparkle blue.
Just standing there in the wind’s restlessness,
An oasis of calm before the storm,
Watching the dark clouds against a black sky,
Exuding intoxicating peacefulness.
Your gentle voice flies against the breeze,
I hear you calling me,
Across the miles,
Brought to me on the whisperings of trees.
Not lonely but alone,
Ever constant in my mind,
A miracle, just for being,
Always you, my love, my “Home”.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
I have re-posted this one from a little while ago, seems a lot of people thought it was about me being homesick.....Actually it was inspired by a photo I saw, and as do many of my poems, it is inspired by, and comes from that picture....It is about how someone might feel about a special person...lol......Andrew....xxx

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cafetwo2010
ever the romantic my friend.. Very nice, 'whisperings of trees..'
Billiegirl
Was this poem about me.blushing you are a beautiful man.
Great write. wine
swade777
Hey Andrew! I too thought this was a BRILLIANT poem about being 'home sick' - VERY WELL written piece, be it about being home sick or the BEAUTIFUL WOMAN in the picture that inspired the write!!

Thanks for re-posting it... I missed it the first time through! thumbs up
niah9
Lovely gentle write Andrew....Niahteddybear peace
agoodguy2have
andrew, thanks for the repost, i heard your voice come thru loud and clear, even without a picture. ;-)
andrew149
Thankyou Cafe my friend.....pleased you liked it...Andrewcool
Redex
Lovely poem Andrew of a love across the waters. Loved all the imagery in nature toohandshake
andrew149
Thankyou BG....lol.....Andrew...xxxcool
DaBomb72
Well done Andrew...absolutely great !handshake
andrew149
No Problem Swade...My pleasure, pleased you liked it....Andrew...cool
andrew149
Thankyou Niah...I'm very pleased you liked it....Andrew...xxxcool
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
With its careful and lovely word choices, your poem, too, with its gentle voice flies against the breeze. In this An oasis of calm, such promise is conveyed.
pilgrimageoflove
"Just standing there in the wind’s restlessness,
An oasis of calm before the storm,"
Love it
andrew149
Thankyou very much GG....lol......Andrew...cool
Odette67
In pools of changing hue,
Rippling halo’s of reflected street lights,
Through curtains of rain,
Your eyes sparkle blue.

Hauntingly beautiful. applause
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