woke up this mornen stretchen my arms thinking bout last night you were so hot you melted my heart you are so sweet you tasted like sugar you touched my lips so warm and moist you must had some water never felt you so wet
waking up getting out of bed wanting to put you in my hands touch my lips for you are still wet but now you turned so cold. let me turn the heat on warm you back up let me give you little bit more of that sugar don't know why you went so cold for i turned on the heat for you to boil cause i love my coffee nice and hot with a little sugar on top
Never said nothen about drinking coffee in bed please re-read this. it says i woke up in the morning thinking about last night. i could been drinking coffee anywhere last night. then i got out of bed so i could put that cup of coffee in my hands. but it was cold.
thank you well as my last few poems were going that was the intention i wanted the reader to think but then give them a different punch line at the end. thank you for reading.
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Very cleverly written.I never got the Coffee till the end.
I thought you were being very explicate about your bedroom behaviour.
Well done.
Never said nothen about drinking coffee in bed please re-read this. it says i woke up in the morning thinking about last night. i could been drinking coffee anywhere last night. then i got out of bed so i could put that cup of coffee in my hands. but it was cold.
kickit.
thank you well as my last few poems were going that was the intention i wanted the reader to think but then give them a different punch line at the end. thank you for reading.
kickit.