by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA
Jul 2012 1,401 Views 26 comments
Thousand Steps.
A thousand steps
along a crooked fence
broken boards
shattered dreams
rusty nail
carving in my jeans
a small creek
flowing underneath
horses stop
to take a drink
a thousand steps
along a crooked fence
mended boards
in the field
of dreams
a small scratch
in my worn out
blue jeans.
along a crooked fence
broken boards
shattered dreams
rusty nail
carving in my jeans
a small creek
flowing underneath
horses stop
to take a drink
a thousand steps
along a crooked fence
mended boards
in the field
of dreams
a small scratch
in my worn out
blue jeans.
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Posted: Jul 2012
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Comments (26)
It's a superb poem, Kick! It's the creme à la creme!
My poem could now die in shame!
windy
Jazzy, don't be scared. Not more than I am. I'm such a... "plastic" man sometimes
I AM SPEECHLESS
FOR THE ONES THAT
WALKED THE
THOUSAND STEP
CHALLENGE.
IT IS ALL OF YOU
WHO MADE THIS
POSSIBLE..
TO ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!
i must run now....
Have a good time my friend! Thank you for the music!
kickit..
saying goodbye is never easy
i owe you a happy time here
thankyou always take care
love mattresses and blankets cotton ones Indian made only.
I'm guessing you're on the road at the moment - stay safe!! (I'm just now getting back to responses on your Thousand Steps challenge
I see that I actually managed to get to yours in a reasonable amount of time - but I fell far short of doing it justice...
Fabulous, fabulous poem!!!!
Yet another fantastic poet, and kind to boot!!!
Best wishes to ya,
Cat
I came up with these first two lines and was lost on how to finish. So I put these first two lines up as a challenge to write a poem using them..it was amazing, everybody on the corner contributed to their version,I mean not one person at that time didn't contribute..this is what I came up with after reading so many others...
Glad you got a tickle out of this, that's is great, thanks for reading.
Kick..