Cut

by andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England, UK

Jul 2011 469 Views 18 comments

THE Cut

Author: andrew149

Once only, showing now,
"Real life...."
The Directors Cut!

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Posted: Jul 2011

About this poem:

Just a thought......Andrew...xxx

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gbbgmanVidin, BulgariaJul 23, 2011

I like it Andrew.
So few words but encompasses every unfolding moment as we talk.
Very clever but I would have used “No Directors Cut…”

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 23, 2011

Thankyou for the suggestion gbbgman, but I chose those words specifically.....Kindest regards....Andrew

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJul 23, 2011

yeah, great my friend, just great...

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJul 23, 2011

Hi, andrew149,
"Lights, camera, action, roll..."

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJul 23, 2011

We've been captured by the cosmic director so it seems..even the Greenies shutter!

BilliegirlNotre-dame de la Salette, Quebec CanadaJul 23, 2011

I like it

kickit22auburn, Washington USAJul 23, 2011

but then again at the end nobody wins. kickit

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJul 23, 2011

Yes. Yes. Once only.
Clarity. Yes.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandJul 23, 2011

It works Andrew....and certainly a one off....niah

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 24, 2011

Thankyou Earl Gey, pleased you liked it....Andrew...

DaBomb72Mantova, Lombardy ItalyJul 24, 2011

Andrew...is this "the film" ? Because i feel like a stuntman !

Superb, my friend !

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandJul 24, 2011

Life is a stage where each one should play a part. What if there is another life..take 2, another cut. Thought provoking..

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 24, 2011

Yeah gnj4u....Roll 'em!......lol....Andrew...xxx

kle76amnew york, New York USAJul 24, 2011

I like it andrew, it could mean so much........

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 24, 2011

by: andrew149

Once only, showing now,
"Real life...."
The Directors Cut!

Amazing how so few words can paint a picture, good one Andrew.

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 29, 2011

Let's keep the Greenies out of this Cafe.....lol....Thankyou,
very pleased you liked it....Andrew...

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJun 27, 2012

Thankyou KLE76 pleased you liked it....Andrew...xxx

windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 27, 2012

What a take, Andrew. Yes I feel like life is only once experience and to think that every second that passes by never comes back and so are the acts committed with it. We maybe able to repeat it over and over again, but, in reality, what is done in every passing moment is a record unique unto itself.

Life, one only, now shwoing the director's cut. A lesson to be deeply learned. We must live life to the fullest.

Thanks andrew, wat a pleasure to read.

Windy

P. S. Yes sir, we are so happy and so thankful with our love.

Thank you again.

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