untouched journey

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Aug 2011 476 Views 8 comments

untouched journey

journey escapes the seeds
of where the driver wants too be
leaving behind peddal blossoms
covering the trail of despair
tranquility descends a mountain top
covered in the freshness that is
untouched by the human hand
delicate flowers powerful scent
over taking the air's gentle breeze
the evening shadow blankets
the world that is unseen.

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Posted: Aug 2011

About this poem:

not only leaving the world you know but covering it up and forgetting about it but leaving it with no animosity, starting a new journey as tho you are just born.

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Comments (8)

niah9Auckland, New ZealandAug 2, 2011

You know me kickit...always will to look harder into the unknown....like I have a death wish....but I'd hate to say....if only I'd.....great write....new subject kind off for you....enjoyed...Niah

country_lady67clarion, Pennsylvania USAAug 2, 2011

Very nice.. I see it as a mountain wildflower meadow untouched by people and often unnoticed.. I love nature and wildflowers..

purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKAug 2, 2011

Lovely description kickit of words, even the explanation is prose poetry ....excellent. Thanks for the read.

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandAug 2, 2011

Going somewhere Kickit? I love the image you have painted here. 'The shadow blankets the world that is unseen' Exciting times ahead I hope.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAAug 2, 2011

Hi, kickit,
Every next moment is the world that is unseen - yet. It's good to think of each moment as a fresh start on an untouched journey. Thanks for sharing your insight with us.