get some

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Aug 2011 442 Views 9 comments

get some

bright lights
closed eyes
dark night
sharp knife
peanut butter
milk duds
won't you
come and get
some
scortched lips
sun's crest
dairy farmers
moons best
hope you
got some
baseball grandpa
shake a stick
don't get hit
car wreck
peel away
bannana
I think you
need one
fruit kiss
passion love
I think you want
some

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Posted: Aug 2011

About this poem:

ringy tingy tiny toe. here is a poem for you.

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Comments (9)

country_lady67clarion, Pennsylvania USAAug 3, 2011

what fun.. nice kickit.. i want some..

beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 3, 2011

i'm with country lady.. very fun write and yeah, i want some

kept my attention

nice job kickit!

hairymonkeyWoBurn, Massachusetts USAAug 3, 2011

my favorite part was the part about the banana
I want to get some
bananas

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAAug 3, 2011

Yup! More please!!

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 3, 2011

Hi Kickit

Your unique style is a breath of fresh air on this board, no airs or graces, simply an offbeat sense of humour and an entertaining way of writing.

Best wishes

Bill

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 3, 2011

I like your style friend,its neat and smooth,i enjoyed it.

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 3, 2011

Simplicity at it's best kick..' plus, you have someone special coming over tonight to share all those wonderful things with you,(especially the fruit kiss).I'm soooo happy for you..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAAug 4, 2011

hello everybody

thank you all for your great comments I cherish each and every one of them. don't have time to respond too individually just a group Thank You, So Kindly my dear poet friends.

Kickit.