after effect

behind the wheel
loss of mind
can not see the lines
bright lights white eyes
felt a bump
waking up laying down
with a straw in your mouth
hey don't stop
want some more beer
pour it in the straw
aprons on
whats going on
bright lights
where am I
you were in a wreck
don't you know
saw white eyes
felt a bump
that's all I know
left a party
got behind the wheel
hit a car
now your legs are gone
and
that poor little girl
you just
killed
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
senseless act

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thelmatalla
It seems any party is no fun without alcohol, a legalised drug which can be a killer and can lead to senseless acts and accidents. Very well written, a thoughtful piece! Thanks for sharing.bouquet teddybear heart beating
steve1223
A very powerful and thought provoking write

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thelmatalla

thank you so kind. hug

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steve

thank you so kind

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cafetwo2010
Should put a healthy fear into any rational person..Great writeprofessor crying
Macduff5
Hi Kicket,

This phenomenon is just all to common. Your poem is a forceful reminder. handshake thumbs up
Ayhra
Powerful writing. Thank you for this reminder kickit handshake bouquet
kickit22
thank you cafe for your kind comment.

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thank you so kind macduff

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thank you so kind ayhra hug

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