YOU

In pools of changing hue,
Rippling halo’s of reflected street lights,
Through curtains of rain,
Your eyes sparkling blue.
Just standing there in the wind’s restlessness,
An oasis of calm before the storm,
Watching the dark clouds against a black sky,
Exuding intoxicating peacefulness.
Your gentle voice flies against the breeze,
Calling me,
Across the miles,
Brought to me on the whisperings of trees.
Not lonely but alone,
Ever constant in my mind,
A miracle, just for being,
Always you, my love, my “Home”.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2012
About this poem:
First poem in dreamweaver 2.....Twixt Quicksilver and Glass.....xxx

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LadyMorgana60
Hi Andrew.. wave
There is always something magical with the "Pull" of home..
Beautifully captured in your lovely poem.. thumbs up
Thanks for sharing..wine cool
Macduff5
Hi Andrew,

Beautifully expressed...such a lovely security expressed here..."Not lonely but alone" but always that place or person that you can go to that defines "home". cheers
niah9
Beautiful Andrew....relaxed words of love...Kathyyay teddybear
marikia
Such a sweet dedication to love, which is constant, a miracle of life, we are always at home there where love dwells. "Live means to love and to be loved in turn" seems to be so true in your case. Thank you for sharing with us this tender tribute to love! bouquet
vyoleta
Beautiful poem, even more so because it is not clear whether it is written to a woman or to a place called home. I like the ambiguity of it coupled with the description that perfectly matches its puzzling tone. Thanks for sharing.
Yankee4you
Home is defineatly where the heart is....that place we long for...and beckons us back....is very well reflected in your poem here...applause
Maxeen_1
Very Beautiful poem Andrew .thankyou for sharing ..
You sum up (no place like home)wonderfully
wine thumbs up handshake
I hear you calling me,
All the way, across the miles,
Brought to me on the whisperings of trees.
Not lonely but alone,
Ever constant in my mind,
A miracle, just for being,
Always you, my love, my “Home”.
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Freckles123
Helloooooo my friend :-)
So true Andrew, home certainly is where my heart lies, liked this a lot, x
teddybear bouquet
andrew149
Thankyou for your lovely comment LM, I am trying so hard to get back to writing but am sooooo busy at the moment, I do miss it terribly....Kindest regards....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thank you Mac, I am very pleased that you enjoyed this poem and appreciated what I was trying to say....Kindest regards, Andrewcool
Redex
Beautiful poem Andrew, can't say moreteddybear
amahlala
Ah the Dreamweaver...always there for her....great write Andrew!bouquet
Pinkpoetress
Andrew,
Great to read from you again. I enjoyed this poem. I know the feeling of loving your home. Like they say, there is no place like home. Take care my friend.
andrew149
Thank you very much Niah, I am starting to find the time for a little writing again which is good....Andrew...xxxcool
paloma66
Our only place of refuge,our love,an oasis of calm and shelter before a storm,a miracle,all speaks of intoxicating peace ensconed in a place called home.Beautiful Andrew,just so beautiful."Home is where the heart/hearth is." Peace and warmth.thumbs up applause bouquet
andrew149
Thankyou Marikia, I think you are right, pleased you enjoyed it...Kindest regards...Andrew...xxxcool
Redex
Hi Andrew hope all goes good for you, your poem still holds it for me and your book is being passed around a poetry group I now attend. (Not lonely but alone) sounds good as does mother natures voice.teddybear
andrew149
You are very welcome Vyoleta, I am pleased that you like the style of it too...Thankyou....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou very much Cafe....dunno about eloquent though...hahhaha...pleased you enjoyed it, that's what counts hey...Andrewcool
windyweatherly
Your gentle voice flies against the breeze,
Calling me,
Across the miles,
Brought to me on the whisperings of trees.
Not lonely but alone,
Ever constant in my mind,
A miracle, just for being,
Always you, my love, my “Home”.



I don't know how I missed this, but it is so sweet and so endearing. "ALWAYS YOU, MY LOVE, MY HOME"

Your love one would be so eternally feeling so beautiful as she reads this beautiful dedication of a very lovely feeling.

Thank you for sharing.

Windy
andrew149
Thankyou yankee, yes it is, but this is more about a person than a place, unless that person is the place hey...lol...Andrewcool
andrew149
Thankyou Maxeen I am very pleased you enjoyed this one...Andrew...xxxcool
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