'padded walls'

exploded mind
unplugged and frail
into the empty
jumped off the rail

denial in depth
abyssed darkened thought
hemisphered labotomy
straight jackets n fold

mis-understood minds
stories not told

sanitorium filled with like minded folk
under knife forced down pills
in most views social poke

intellect profound
padded walls not a sound
forced recluse arms in fold
padded floor paced around

echoed walls of plight cry
captive ghosts till they die

unsung eye is not shy
deadened sight lived their lie
as the gavel met the block permeated air
lifetime lock

routined minutes....hours n days
clustered thought in stale haze
one sides right......one sides left
down the middle disconnect
emotions that hang yet...on the edge...of that blade

clunkin clang of the lock every night nine o'clock
five am early rise
no horizon of new size

boiled egg, toast and pills, blackened coffee, tea or juice
lift your tongue...wheres the pill
did you swallow it whole again

twelve foot guard skirts the yard
barbwire link bound atop
one way in...is your out..
visitors log dried up ink

was the gavel
that took
what the mind had to think!


~Bentlee~
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2009
About this poem:
days of the early sanitorium's.

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andrew149
Truly a dark time of the past, hopefully never to be repeated, well written my friend, thankyou.........andrew.
Bentlee
ty Andrew, oh yes in the past indeed even as I wrote this it was a little unsettling as it flowed. Ty for your thoughts my friend.
sshore
felt the atmosphere if one could call it that..phenomenal flow of words and not just words its real!
you have captured in words such intensity and reality unbelievable!!....TY!
Bentlee
ty sshore, in this writing I felt I had to strive for an intense reality to make it become real in a way that they never knew to know it! ty for your thoughts hug
sshore
applause
sshore
applause cheering hug
amahlala
Disturbing, thought-provoking and yet it captures the feel of the era.
Bentlee
ty Ama yes it is sadly disturbing, however one of the ways many people suffered in mans ignorance of right vs wrong and premature diagnosis of an ill mind and or equivelent nervous break down treated as crazy in the head or mentally disturbed too. Ty for your comment Ama.
jazzy75
Powerful poem Bentlee hug
Bentlee
ty Jazzy, after I read your comment I read it slow three times in a row an I honestly didn't realize the impact of how it reads. Ty for how you commented an made me look at it differently from outside the box I suppose.wine
poetengineer
thanks for ur beauty mind as always i like and enjoy reading ur words , god bless u my dear friend
Bentlee
Thank you so much Khaled for your compliment on my writing. It's nice to see people enjoy what I write, encouragement for more lol. God bless you too my friend.
Bentlee
Ty sshore for your other two comments of appreciation, it certainly does contain a powerful message an thought of how it was. :)
boyshchrm6
Yes, quite amazing the things that once went on.
Thanks for vivid picture.cool angel :confused
Bentlee
boyshchrm absolutely ur right with ur comment, hmmm confused? how I'm not sure. ty for your thoughts.
gypsyheart
So glad i'm only viewing through your eyes Bentlee..lol.Well written and expressedcool bouquet
trurorob
yes a grim reminder of mans inhumanity Bentlee
rob
Bentlee
Lol Gypsy I hear ya there, i did some reading on that topic awhile back. Ty for your comment an compliment:)
Bentlee
Yes Rob indeed inhumanity after the fact of the initial decision of incarceration, based upon mans ignorance of the human mind an all it's eccentric ways:) ty for sharing your thoughts:)
Bentlee
I watched the movie Gothika 2 nights ago, it reminded me of this write and how this type of incarceration could make one go crazy in self thought, and placed thought by others.
Bentlee
edited version of the original, enjoy.cheers
SCatlyn
Excellent write! Really sad, but true... thanks for shedding more light on this
Bentlee
ty Scatlyn....this is one of my favourites, i wrote on here for a long time with my cell phone. Which only allowed me to effect in paragraph. Now I'm on a laptop lol, Santa came early wine
KnightOfReverie
I could easily see this being made into a song. It's got great flow & is eloquently written. I liked the flow so much I had to read it twice. Great poem Bentlee. =)
Bentlee
Hi Jak, glad you liked it, I have a friend that thought he may be able to put music to it, perhaps one day I'll do just that lol, thanks for the reply, cheers. cheers
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