UNTIL.......

I remember...
Hair like rapids on a quiet stream,
Eyes like tranquil pools, so deep I could not see,
You, were a poem of a storm upon a quiet breeze,
Yet, your presence only gently rustled the leaves,
Through boat wires you sang your song,
As if to another place you might belong,
Your voice so low, with every wave upon the shore,
Not heard, yet strangely felt to my core,
You are here?......I know you are!
forever like the twinkling of a star,
You could not leave any more than I,
As sure as blue follows the night sky.
You will wait for me, I know you will,
And I....
Will always be here for you still.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
Thought I would like to write something...Hope you like it...Andrew...xxx

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cafetwo2010
Hey Andrew..Whatever you write bears a distint style that's quite hard to label which makes it that much more interesting. Smooth sailing my friend.cool thumbs up
jazzy75
HI Andrew....cheers to until......yay
Redex
Liked it very muchteddybear
andrew149
Thankyou Cafe....I am very pleased you enjoyed it...Had a few minutes spare so decided to have a write and this is what came out...dunno where from but here it is hey....lol....Andrewcool
andrew149
Hi Jaz....Yeah why not hey...cheers lol.....Andrew...xxxcool
Ahyra
I like it. Very much Andrew, thank you bouquet
paloma66
Your poem broughtto my mind the Song "Till" by Tony Bennet.Liked this poem Andrew.


thumbs up cool teddybear
Macduff5
Hi Andrew,

Nice to catch up with you again. Loved the poem. cheers
windyweatherly
Sir Andrew what a beautiful promise " I WILL ALWSYS BE HERE FOR YOU STILL"

Thanks for sharing

Windy
Yankee4you
Andrew....a very fastinating and desriptive write...
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
The juxtaposition of images of the quiet and the storm is compelling. Your voice so low, with every wave upon the shore, Not heard, yet strangely felt to my core...
andrew149
Really good to see you redex, glad you are still around my friend...Pleased you liked it....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou Ahyra, I am very pleased you like it....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou Paloma, I have never heard that one...but will have a look at it...Pleased you liked this one though...Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
and you too Mac....Thankyou very much....Andrewcool
andrew149
Thankyou Windy...very pleased you enjoyed it....Andrew...xxx...cool
trurorob
Maybe is such a big word Andrew, but Like the poem it can happen, I think we all should always wait.
Rob
jena_massie
so this is poetry.. pure lovely perfect
wish you would publish your poems they are, well, perfect.
cannot find another word for perfection.
applause
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