Thanks for the kind comments Odette ..............much appreciated regards n61
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 9, 2012
This is wonderfully penned the sensitive side really came out there M.M
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 9, 2012
Hi Nuwahri,
Firstly, nice to met you at last Secondly, why did you have to give yourself a nom de plume so difficult to spell. Thirdly..I can so identify with your thoughts here it's uncanny. What can I say...simply great stuff. Cheers mate
Hi Macduff ........firstly apologies for getting your name wrong i only just realised ...............its a pleasure to meet you too............as for my name its a tweak on my tribal heritage on my fathers side .........thats what you meant by nom de plume isnt ? showing my illitercy here any way glad you could relate to it an thanks very much for the comments ....regards n61 ps iwas rolling around the floor from your last poem regards mate
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 9, 2012
Ah N61 sometimes life starts and ends this way mmmm just because were different a great just because.
Hey thanks Redex for the comments ...........very much appreciated .....regards m61
BBMis4meHouston, Texas USASep 9, 2012
"Give to Caesar what is Caesar's"
I'm pretty new here and I have so much experience as most of you, mostly in English but I must say of all the poems In this Challenger that I have read this is my favorite.
I loved the rhythm. Each verse has an interesting and beautiful shape, and I especially liked the content.
"You touched my soul with your words, with your art".
Hi, Nuwahri61, Living in a fruitful hope As a garnish to our sigh... Among all of this poem's lines with such emotion that tug at the heart, this one pulled the hardest on mine. Thank you for sharing.
Hey BB......wow thanks very much for your generous and kind comments ............i am really glad you enjoyed it .........much appreciated .....regards n61
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A very long time ago
I admire your commitment
To finally let go
Very touching poem Nuwhari
Firstly, nice to met you at last Secondly, why did you have to give yourself a nom de plume so difficult to spell. Thirdly..I can so identify with your thoughts here it's uncanny.
What can I say...simply great stuff. Cheers mate
I'm pretty new here and I have so much experience as most of you,
mostly in English but I must say of all the poems In this Challenger that I have read this is my favorite.
I loved the rhythm. Each verse has an interesting and beautiful shape, and I especially liked the content.
"You touched my soul with your words, with your art".
Thank you :)
Hugs and Blessings
Living in a fruitful hope As a garnish to our sigh... Among all of this poem's lines with such emotion that tug at the heart, this one pulled the hardest on mine. Thank you for sharing.
SORRY I made a mistake writing my comment
I mean... I have NOT so much experience as most of you guys
Blessings