Just Because [ Macduff Challenge ]

Just because it's over
Doesn't mean i don't care
There is such a thing called friendship
That we can both still share

Just because it wasn't right
When we were a pair
Doesn't mean its black an white
As individuals we did spare

Just because life is such
An the the reasons were not there
Our journey was a long one
Many hardships we did stare

Just because you were you
Individual an strong
I was me ...everfree
I could do no wrong

Just because for that very reason
An for many many more
The clash of personalities
Had us both heading for the door

Just because we had kids
We stuck by an by
Living in a fruitful hope
As a garnish to our sigh

Just because you glossened
A very tarnished coat
An never opened your thoughts to me
Only to sit an gloat

Just because you wanted to leave
A very long time ago
I admire your commitment
To finally let go

Just because your happy
In your new life
Doesn't mean i didn't care
An love you as my wife........
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
Started with " just because " an ended up with this.........

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Comments (26)

morgen90210
Thank you for sharing ...this is a truly wonderful write.heart wings
Nuwahri61
Thanks Morgen ...............much appreciated mate ......regards n61cheers
Peneloperose
WOW this is beautiful especially coming from a man . makes me feel pride for you. What a man you must be. Thank you for letting us see.rose rose rose
orientalkoru
I knew there was something behind the smile Nu...hats off to you sir!teddybear hug
Nuwahri61
Uhm thanks Peneloperose for your comments uhm gulp .....appreciated n61cheers
Serenity4two
this is lovely --very touching indeed .F
handshake
Nuwahri61
Thanks Serenity ...........glad you liked it .......much appreciated grin cool
Odette67
Just because you wanted to leave
A very long time ago
I admire your commitment
To finally let go

Very touching poem Nuwhari purple heart
Nuwahri61
Thanks for the kind comments Odette ..............much appreciated regards n61grin cool
Poetnumber1
This is wonderfully pennedapplause the sensitive side really came out theregrin M.M
Macduff5
Hi Nuwahri,

Firstly, nice to met you at last handshake Secondly, why did you have to give yourself a nom de plume so difficult to spell. Thirdly..I can so identify with your thoughts here it's uncanny.
What can I say...simply great stuff. Cheers mate cheers
Nuwahri61
Hey thanks Poet glad you liked it ............much appreciated regards n61cheers grin cool
Nuwahri61
Hi Macduff ........firstly apologies for getting your name wrong i only just realised ...............its a pleasure to meet you too............as for my name its a tweak on my tribal heritage on my fathers side .........thats what you meant by nom de plume isnt ? showing my illitercy here rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing any way glad you could relate to it an thanks very much for the comments ....regards n61 ps iwas rolling around the floor from your last poem regards mate handshake cheers
Redex
Ah N61 sometimes life starts and ends this way mmmm just because were differentbanana a great just because.peace yay
Nuwahri61
Hey thanks Redex for the comments ...........very much appreciated .....regards m61 grin cool
BBMis4me
"Give to Caesar what is Caesar's"

I'm pretty new here and I have so much experience as most of you,
mostly in English but I must say of all the poems In this Challenger that I have read this is my favorite.

I loved the rhythm. Each verse has an interesting and beautiful shape, and I especially liked the content.

"You touched my soul with your words, with your art".

Thank you :)

Hugs and Blessingsangel purple heart
puma17
Nice poem man!thumbs up beer
gnj4u
Hi, Nuwahri61,
Living in a fruitful hope As a garnish to our sigh... Among all of this poem's lines with such emotion that tug at the heart, this one pulled the hardest on mine. Thank you for sharing.
Nuwahri61
Hey BB......wow thanks very much for your generous and kind comments ............i am really glad you enjoyed it .........much appreciated .....regards n61 handshake cheers grin
Nuwahri61
Thanks Puma ......good onya mate .......regards n61handshake
Nuwahri61
Hi Gnj4u.........thanks very much for your lovely comments ..............much appreciated regards n61grin cool
BBMis4me
"typographical mistake" doh
SORRY I made a mistake writing my comment blushing

I mean...confused I have NOT so much experience as most of you guys grin


Blessingsangel teddybear heart wings
cherryreggae
Wow simply amazing write...N61!applause cheering applause cheering
Yankee4you
Nuwa...A very sentemental write at that.....amazing where this took you.....beer
Nuwahri61
Hi Cherry thanks for the comments ...........much appreciated regards n61comfort grin cool
Nuwahri61
Hey Yankee .......Thanks for the comments mate ........much appreciated......regards n61grin cool
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