wishing well

by andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England, UK

Jul 2010 478 Views 11 comments

The wishing well

I stand at the door…..I toll the bell,
Having inched along the razors edge,
As it opens, I feel the welcoming void,
The darkness of the wishing well.

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Posted: Jul 2010

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HMMMMMMM!!...........Andrew.......xxx

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Comments (11)

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 3, 2010

Wishing you well x

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAJul 3, 2010

well well well, what have we here?..

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 4, 2010

Yes have looked down that black hole decided to make my own wishes come true, or try

The void I live, this is how I saw your verse, terrible for Sunday morning

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAJul 4, 2010

a wish in one hand, may turn to sand, thru the fingers, as the wish still lingers...

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 4, 2010

Thank you Caroljoyce........Andrew......xxx

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJul 6, 2010

Wow, wow and wow!!! Beautiful, as always..., thanks my friend for sharing..., all day today, I have been standing at the door, and tolling the bell, you have given me courage to go on...

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 6, 2010

A wish more than anything, thankyou Ladybee.......Andrew...xxx

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 6, 2010

Thankyou Redex, each excursion being an adventure in the mind!.......Andrew......xxx

andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 7, 2010

Only if you hold on too tight hey GG?...........Andrew.

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJul 22, 2010

Excellent! There is much contained here...between these 4 lines. Here goes...throwing a penny in!!

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 28, 2010

i throw a penny on a dark wishing well,just hoping the wish i said made it well..splendid write for a dark hole full of water out there.thanks again for the share of this good piece