STRANGER IN A STRANGE LAND (Part 1)

The cold chills me to the bone,
In this place, I feel so alone,
There is no sun here, the keen wind blows,
The cloud around me isn’t telling, though I think it knows.
One say’s, “I am your heart, listen to me”,
The other says, “No, I am your brain, listen to me”.
Somewhere in the gulf between,
My mind, always present, never seen,
Can’t decide what to do,
Can’t choose between the two,
One says “Leave”, the other says “Love”
One taking the part of hawk, the other of dove,
And great pain does this on my being inflict,
Knowing whatever, I could be the future casualty of this conflict,
Walking the blurred line drawn in the shifting sand,
I am indeed……..A stranger in a strange land!
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Apologies to Heinlien for borrowing the title....We all have to make life changing decisions sometimes, knowing that whatever we decide, it could be the wrong decision......Andrew....xxx

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jeddah12
blushing were you in hibernation here andrew?confused tho i felt the chill,,,very nice to imagine to be alone in a coldteddybear heart wings
Ladybee42
yes I agree, and the more you step out of your comfort zone, the more strange places you must visit.wink
lovely words andrew thumbs up bouquet bouquet
andrew149
Thankyou Jeddah, pleased you found something in it ......Andrew....xxx
Redex
You have such a way with words Andrew, at moment your in my mind I think!!!!
Thats what I did this morning, blurred line in sandlaugh
Conclusion non yet. Enjoyed reading my mindwow
amahlala
Andrew..an interesting take on the decisions that we face in life, can't wait for Part IIbouquet
andrew149
Thank you Ladybee, yep, know what you mean......Andrew....xxx
Ladyjj
A wonderful write Andrew..thumbs up
Sometimes the risk in stepping out of our comfort zones pay's off.
If we didnt at the time it matter's..we would never find our answer's...I will look forward to part two. wine

Ljj

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andrew149
Thankyou Redex, nice to see you are enjoying the outdoor life....Andrew...xxx
jazzy75
Been in this place many times my friend....it is never an easy choice. You captured the feeling of conflict brilliantly. Thank you for sharinghug
caroljoyce
Very well expressed Andrew. Go with the heart, the brain hasn't the foggiest. Push through it. xxdunno
andrew149
Thankyou Ama, pleased you enjoyed it....Andrew.....xxx
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
With every day full of new possibilities, Walking the blurred line drawn in the shifting sand is the ever-present landscape of life. It's nice walking with you.
andrew149
Thankyou Ljj, really pleased you liked this one.....Andrew....xxx
andrew149
My pleasure Jaz, very pleased you enjoyed this one....Andrew...xxxcool
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