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stormseeker223

my final bow

Many years ago a man was persecuted for what he believed.

His skin torn from his bone, a crown made out of thorn and sent to calvery.

Where he made is final bow.



how will you make your final bow? Will you say no way. No how. Or throw your hands up in the air.

Screaming yes oh Lo...rd I care. Will you sacrafice for everlasting life. How will you make your final bow?



A young girl, so innocent, a gun pointed to her face. Asked a simple question and in her answer did not hesatate. Do you belive in God? YES. She made her final bow.



how will you make your final bow? Will you say no way. No how. Or throw your hands up in the air.

Screaming yes oh Lord I care. Will you sacrafice for everlasting life. How will you make your final bow?



Every night we get down on our knees and pray, thanking God for our blessing every day. We say he is in our hearts and we love him so. But when asked do you believe will you say no to save your skin of say yes and sit by Jesus's side forever? How will you make your final bow?



how will you make your final bow? Will you say no way. No how. Or throw your hands up in the air.

Screaming yes oh Lord I care. Will you sacrafice for everlasting life. How will you make your final bow?



God sent us his son as test number one. We failed but did not lose as long as he is the path we choose. Jesus made the very first bow.

how will you make your final bow? Will you say no way. No how. Or throw your hands up in the air.

Screaming yes oh Lord I care. Will you sacrafice for everlasting life. How will you make your final bow?



how will you make your final bow? Will you say no way. No how. Or throw your hands up in the air.

Screaming yes oh Lord I care. Will you sacrafice for everlasting life. How will you make your final bow?



I throw my hands up in the screaming yes o Lord I care. I will take ever lasting life. For you I will sacrifice. You will be my final bow. My final bow.
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Posted: Feb 2013
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Unknown

Unwishful Thinking

You're dead to me.
and it brings a smile to my
Evil side
Can't watch you breathe
No Breath will ever enter your chest
Again
Even though to me it means every thing to see
Your corpse start to
Rot away
Before my eyes
I can't look away
From this beautiful site

So sad to say.
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you.

I wish the worst
Possible way to make your heart just burst
Inside your chest
Inside the empty place that's now
A cavity
Bring it all to me
Bring back the life from your buried smile
Even though to me it means every thing
Just to watch you die

So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for tot

You're dead to me
You're dead to me
You're dead to me
You're dead to me

So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
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Posted: Jul 2013
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Roarme0

To know

Over there there runs a little boy
He sings his song of joy
He sings his song so loud and clear
For the others
He knows they hear.

Isn't it so grand
Isn't it so grand
To know

The river that runs by
So swift and fast
You know the baited hook won't last.

Isn't it so grand
Isn't it so grand
To Know.

The Lord he planted seeds in the ground
Some went here
Some went there
As the world went around.
Some grew strong
Some grew weak
Others you know
They are still asleep.

Isn't it so grand
Isn't it so grand
To know.
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
Just knowing there is potential, is so grand.
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lakedistrict1

Live The Dream

oh ive got heart,and ive got soul,ive got dreams,of a secure home,ive got a girl,that loves me true,well hey my darling,heres what we will do,Yeah ill be king,and youll be queen,we will buy a beautiful home,and live the dream. Yeah the deal we got,well it wasnt so good,were allowed to dream,and i think we should,Well we worked hard,lived an honest life,contributed by day,made love at night,Yeah we done our best,you know what i mean,lets have that lift,and live the dream.Darling dont feel bad,cos its all deserved,theres a place in heaven,for us reserved,Yeah let the beacon fire,let the belfry toll,let the lakelands flood,to cleanse my soul,kiss me good my lady,you really are my queen,Let me hold you close,and live the dream
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
This is actually a song I wrote which i play guitar to.It just came out in about 20 minutes,and was inspired by my girl and the trauma we faced after i was involved in a very bad road accident.Basically i was hospitalised for 5 months and suffered brain injury.Every day for 5 month she came to hoepital to see me,which now when i think was very commendable.I wrote this song when we were still together,we have now broke up unfortunately due to my bad temper and boredom of not being in work no more.Having never had nothing,its a song that argues against having guilt,by way of the promise of an insurance payout of which i still await,at the time money didnt matter i was so screwed up with brain injury. To this day i still an odd time sing and play this song,i dedicate it to JJ x
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sexxmagick74

"ONE STEP FROM CHAOS" 6/11/2011

A MALICIOUS VOICE WHISPERS FROM DEEP INSIDE YOUR MIND.
AS THE IMAGES OF EVIL DANCE ALL THROUGHOUT THE NIGHT.
FILLED WITH DREAD AND CREEPING TERROR, THE DOORWAY TO HELL AWAITS.
THE LURKERS THAT MOVE IN THE DARKNESS HAVE ARISONED FROM THE GRAVE...

REWARDED WITH THE NECTOR OF PAIN.
NIGHTMARES FROM BEYOND THE GRAVE.
SOUNDS OF TORMENT AWOKE IN DARKNESS.
FOREVERMORE, DWELL IN MADNESS...

THE LAUGHTER OF DEMONS FILL ANCIENT VOID.
YOU'VE BECOME THE CHOSEN ONE, THE ONE WHO MUST BURN.
SPATTERED WITH BLOOD AND BITS OF FLESH, SCREAMS OF MINGLED TERROR.
IT'S THE END OF YOUR WORLD, NOWHERE YOU CAN TURN...

REWARDED WITH THE NECTOR OF PAIN.
NIGHTMARES FROM BEYOND THE GRAVE.
SOUNDS OF TORMENT AWOKE IN DARKNESS.
FOREVERMORE, DWELL IN MADNESS.

IT IS BUT ONE STEP FROM CHAOS...

LOOKING INTO THE DEPTHS IF THE FIRE.
WALKING A ROAD LEADING TO DAMNATION.
BURIED DEEP IN THE DARKEST GRAVE.
GAZE TO YOURSELVES AND EMBRACE YOUR DEMONS...

DEVOTED UNTO THE GODS OF EVIL.
SPAWNED BY THE KINGDOM OF THE DEVIL.
EMBRACE THE INSANITY.
SATAN'S LAW OF MALIGNITY...

THE VOICES SPEAK FROM THE WORLD BEYOND.
"SELL YOUR SOUL TO SATAN..."
THIS IS THE EMBODIMENT OF EVIL.
FROM THE THING THAT LAY UNBURIED WITHIN...

REWARDED WITH THE NECTOR OF PAIN.
NIGHTMARES FROM BEYOND THE GRAVE.
SOUNDS OF TORMENT AWOKE IN DARKNESS.
FOREVERMORE, DWELL IN MADNESS...

IT IS BUT ONE STEP FROM CHAOS...
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
I wrote this one when i was in the halfway house. i was unsure what i was feeling at the time. i do know i was remembering at that time that my step dad left my mom for my girlfriend while i was in prison... this song is on an album of lyrics i wrone consisting of 12 songs called "OF DOOR AND DEMON"
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sexxmagick74

"BINDING A HEART IN CHAINS" 5/1/2013

I AM TRAPPED SO DEEP WITHIN MY HIDEOUS AND TWISTED FORM.
LOST IN THE DEPTHS WITH ALL OF MY PAIN, TIED TO THE CHAINS OF AN ENDLESS SCORN.
CRUCIFIED WITHIN MY HEART, A SHATTERED SOUL FOR THE HELL I HAD FOUND.
FOR, UPON MY HEAD THE THORNS WERE PLACED, FOR IN DISGRACE, THROUGH HER BLOOD I WAS BOUND...

BOUND BY THE BEAUTY THAT FULFILLS MY FATE.
THROUGH THE MIRROR THAT DOES NOT HIDE MY WRETCHED FACE.
ECLIPSED BY A BLACK ETERNITY WITHIN A DYING WORLD.
CAPTURED BY THE PLAGUE BURIED BENEATH MY GAZE...

UNEARTHING REVELATIONS WITHIN THIS WICKED REALM.
FROM THE GODS THAT HAD SPAT THE DARK OF MY LONELY BIRTH.
POSSESSED BY THE VERY DEMONS WHICH LAY SO DEEP WITHIN.
FOR THE DOMINION THAT BEARS MY RELENTLESS CURSE...

I FEEL NO HOPE IN MY DESTINY, FOR I WAS LEFT TO BURN.
AND IN THIS BLACK ETERNITY, THERE'S NO PLACE LEFT FOR ME TO TURN.
I AM ALL ALONE IN MY MURKY SWAMP, A TRUTH THAT'S HAUNTED ME IN ALL OF MY DREAMS.
HER PRESENCE HAD SCALDED ME BEYOND BELIEF, AND I WAS THE INSTRUMENT FOR THE DESIRES OF PAIN SHE UNLEASHED...

I SEE HER FACE, I FEEL HER ESSENCE THAT LURKS WHEN TWILIGHT IS CALLING.
WAS IT HER HATE WHICH MASKED HER LOVE, FOR MY HEART WAS BLED, AND MY BLOOD WAS SPILLING...

FOUND BY THE DARKNESS THAT UNCOVERED MY CRIES.
AS A SOFT, TENDER BREEZE CARESSES THE NIGHTLY SKIES.
INDULGING IN DARK PASSIONS FOR THE PLEASURE OF HER SIN
CONFRONTED BY THE BITTER LUST, BY THE EVIL THAT LIES FROM WITHIN...

I AM STILL TRAPPED WITHIN THE ANGUISH OF MY BLACK MEMMORIES.
FOR THE TIMES I HAD HAD THE CHANCE TO EMBRACE.
YES, I ONCE DANCED TO THE HAPPY SOUNDS ON PATHS WE'VE BOTH TREAD UPON.
UPON THE ROAD TO THE TRUTHS WE BOTH HAD COME TO OWN FACE TO FACE...

BUT NOW, I FEEL VEXED UPON BY THE DECEPTION AND ALL OF THE LIES.
FOR THE TORMENT THAT WAS CONCEALED BY INNER DEMONS.
AND AS I CRAWLED OUT OF MY LOWLY GRAVE UPON A COLD AND RAINY NIGHT.
MY DREAMS OF HOPE LAY SHATTERED, FOR MY INCLINATIONS WERE OF ME DYING...

LOST WITHIN A SPELL OF UNBIRTH, UNBECOMING AND DEAD.
AND THEN IT WAS UNVEILED, THE FILTH AND GRIME OF BEING SHAT UPON.
FOR, UNDERNEATH THE DEEP, DARK TRUTHS WITHIN THE BOWELS OF MY BEINGD DEPTHS.
I UNRAVELED THE MYSTERIES OF ALL OF THE DREAMS OF HER THAT STILL SURLY HAUNTS...
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
This is on the album i wrote which i call "DEADMARES"
I Believe these lyrics dont need explaining. but its about a deep pain which shattered my soul from a few years ago...

...By the way, i have a typo or 2 in my song lyrics... its hard to type this on an android thats on its last leg... lol...

it was around 2:30 am, when i wrote this song. it took
me 10 minutes to write it, as a natter of fact. i wrote 5 songs that night. and i wrote this album in 4 daz... hope someone out there likes it and can identify with the pain i express within thewe lyrics... enjoy...
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sexxmagick74

"DECIMATED" 5/14/2012

AN AROMA ASSEMBLES THE CALL.
OF THE BUTCHERED WHO DIED IN VEIN.
SO, WITNESS THE VICTIMS WHO FELL.
ON THE GROUND, THEIR BLOOD IS STAINED...

WITH DISTRESS DISTRIBUTED.
DISTURBING IMAGES DEFINED.
DIVINE DARKNESS IN ITS PUREST FORM
A DOCTRINE REVEALED IN TIME...

THEY WERE DECIMATED... DECIMATED...
THEY WERE DECIMATED... DECIMATED...

DEVOTED TO THE CAUSE OF PAIN.
DESPAIR REIGNS IN THIS PAINTED SCENE.
MURDER HAS BECOME ORDAINED.
DEATHS PLEDGED IN NIGHTMARISH DREAMS...

SOME CORPSES ARE IN FLAMES.
THROUGH THE WAKE OF SINISTER AGONY.
FOR, THE SMELL OF DEATH REMAINS.
RAINING BLOOD WITH VICIOUS INTENSITY...

THEY WERE DECIMATED... DECIMATED...
THEY WERE DECIMATED... DECIMATED...

AS CLEAR AS DAYLIGHT.
ARE THE CROWS WHO MAKE THEIR FEAST.
A VILLAGE THAT LIES IN RUINS.
A SACRIFICE FOR A GOTHIC BEAST...

THE WAGES OF SIN WEIGH HEAVY.
ON THE SOUL BEARS THE MARK.
AND THE PAIN WAS FELT BY MANY.
AN INTIMACY SO EVIL AND DARK...

THEY WERE DECIMATED... DECIMATED...
THEY WERE DECIMATED... DECIMATED...
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
This song is the first song on one of my lyrical albums i titled "DAEMON" Their are 12 songs on it. Like the other i posted, this one is much darker.
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sexxmagick74

"ABOMINATIONS OF THE UNIVERSE" 9/20/2012

CHANCE THE POWERS OF UNCERTAINTY.
CHARMED BY THE ENHANCEMENTS LURED BY DESTINY.
DIAGRAMS OF PENTAGRAMS CORRUPT WHAT WAS ONCE INNOCENT.
A DECEPTIONS ASCENTION INTO MADNESS, SOULS TO HELL DESCEND...

FOR THE DISCORD SOWN THROUGH THE ABOMINATIONS OF THE UNIVERSE.
FOR THE CHAOS THAT FULFILLS THE BLACKNESS THROUGH A PANDEMONIUM OF PAIN.
DISCOLOURED BY DISBELIEF, ABANDONED BY LIFE INTO AN EVIL REALM.
IT'S LIKE A FANTASY OF HEAVEN, FIR THE HELL IN REALITY WAS MADE...

IN AN EPIC QUEST, WITHIN THE PLANES OF DAMNATION.
TO FIND THE KEY ENGULFED IN FLAME, FORTOLD IN THE EVIL INCLINATION.
SEARCHING IN WONDEROUS NIGHTMARES TO SEEK OUT THE DEPTHS ENTOMBED IN HORROR.
AND ONCE UPON A TIME TO DIE, YOU LIE WITHIN YOUR CREATED FORLORN...

AT LAST! A DEMON IS NOW BORN...
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
This song is the first one on the album of lyrics i wrote called
"THE DIVINE SPIRIT OF DAMNTION." This album is one of my best masterpieces i had written. heavy & melodic black metal. hope u like this one. i was having a hard time dealing with my ex~wifes death who died Februrary 4th, 2012... Until the next one... stay heavy!!!
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sexxmagick74

"THE VICTIM OF NEEDLESS SUFFERING" 10/25/2012

CONSUMED BY SELF JUDGMENT.
MINIPULATED BY IMMORAL FEARS.
OBSESSED BY A DARK NATURE.
CARESSED BY ALL OF YOUR FALLING TEARS...
INDULGING WITHIN THE PAIN.
ENGULFED UNDER IT'S VEIL.
BURNING WITHIN IT'S WAKE.
IS FOR THE HATE THAT OPENS UP THE UNHOLY SEAL...

YOU ARE THE VICTIM OF NEEDLESS SUFFERING.
THE VICTIM...
THE VICTIM OF NEEDLESS SUFFERING.
OF NEEDLESS SUFFERING...

POSSESSED BY THE MADNESS.
ENGRAVED BY IT'S ESSENCE.
ENHANCED BY WOE AND SADNESS.
FULFILL THE DARK DOMINION...
CAN NOT SEE WITHIN THE BLACKNESS.
THE CARNATION OF A NEEDLESS SUFFERING.
INDENTATION IS RIPE IN RVIL.
TO PREY UPON THOSE WHO ARE BLEEDING...

THE VICTIM OF NEEDLESS SUFFETING.
OF NEEDLESS SUFFERING...
YOU ARE THE VICTIM OF NEEDLESS SUFFERING.
THE VICTIM...
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
This song will be on the album called
"THE DIVINE SPIRIT OF DAMNATION"

have not decided if i want to leave it where its at, or add one more verse and chorus...

who ever reads this one, let me know what u think...
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sexxmagick74

"THE LAST REMNANTS OF GRACE" 8/29/2014

I THOUGHT IS WAS FOREVER.
BUT NOW IT SEEMS IT'S NEVER.
THROUGH ETERNITY I MAY ALWAYS BE ALONE...

THE PAIN IS FELT DEEP INSIDE.
THIS TRUTH CAN'T BE DENIED.
FOR, THE TWILIGHT HAS NOW ECLIPSED MY SOUL...

FELT BY MY FEARS.
CONSUMED BY MY TEARS.
OH, HOW THE DARKNESS DEEPLY UNFOLDS...

THE UNDYING SORROW.
THERE IS NO TOMARROW.
FOR, ALL OF MY WOE IS NOW EXPOSED...

THE LAST REMNANTS OF GRACE.
AT LAST! IT FADES AWAY.
FOR, IM LEFT SO BROKEN AND SO HOLLOW...

THIS EMPTY VESSEL IS DEAD.
THROUGH THE WAKE OF FEAR I TREAD.
AND THERE'S NO LIFE LEFT INSIDE, ONLY PAIN AND SORROW...
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
This song will be on one of my newest albums called "THE DARKENING" It is a wonderous masterpiece, so dark and melodic...
this song truly belongs in my archive of lyrics... hope it suizs my fans out there.
this song the whole of the album is based upon the pain a woman put me through. unlike the album"SOWING THE SEEDS OF TORMENT" which i write both albums in the past couple of months... ;)
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