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nosaint29

"Love Is Just A Word To Say"

when all thats good is gone
and all my charm has worn off
love is just a word to say
when your in too deep to walk away

and to this day it's still a mystery
what you thought you seen in me
but now that you've played your games
i think we both lose all the same

(chorus)
do i ever cross your mind
cuz you do mine every time
the day is consumed by the night

do you ever wish things coulda worked out
caught up in the crowd
cuz wonder where you are now
or if your'e alright

(bridge)
you had my heart.....
in pieces
long enough to know through cold seasons
i may never feel warm again

if love is just a word to say
when there's nothing left
just know it was real to me even...
after the arguments
even after the moment's end
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Posted: Oct 2012
About this poem:
it's kinda straight forward,it's about going through a break up of a relationship we held on too long to
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Alan1556

MY DARLING ANGEL

She stares at me from up above
Never ever showing me love
All I wanna know is will she love me
I pray to you baby to tell me
Do you love me?

Love is what I need
Love is what you need
Love is what we need
So tell me baby please do you love me?

I’ve been crying for you
I know I need you
So please baby let me know
Do you need me like I need you?
All I want is you baby

Love is what I need
Love is what you need
Love is what we need
So tell me baby please do you love me?

I’ll always be there for you
No matter how hard it gets
As long as you need me
And baby I know you need me
So don’t let me go

Love is what I need
Love is what you need
Love is what we need
So tell me baby please do you love me?

Love is what I need
Love is what you need
Love is what we need
So tell me baby please do you love me?
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Posted: Oct 2012
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Alan1556

broken hearts

She tore me apart and broke my heart
I don’t think I’ll ever love again
Been feeling low for some time now
Been waiting for someone to love again

But that’s when I found you
You showed me how to love again
You mended my heart and put my pieces back together
I don’t know how to tell you this but I love you

You have been pulling me in with those big green eyes
I don’t think I could ever look away
No matter how hard I try u will always be on my mind
I want you to change my mind for you

But that’s when I found you
You showed me how to love again
You mended my heart and put my pieces back together
I don’t know how to tell you this but I love you
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Posted: Oct 2012
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Alan1556

this isnt a poem but the start to sarah my love

She’s staring at me with those big green eyes
Trying to pull me closer to her heart
No matter how hard I try I can’t look away
I wanna stay here with her no matter what it takes

So baby please let me in I’m dying to get too close to you
We may be miles apart but I can still hear u calling my name
Baby there’s nothing that can keep me from u
We say we love each other but sadly we don’t know each other
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Posted: Oct 2012
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akpauly

train wreck (for micheal)

I'm a train wreck, all aboard.
I'm a never was, nevermore.
I'm a dark cloud pourin rain
an effort made in vain
to keep warm

I should've been the one
to pass away from this place
I'd have given anything to see his face
why'd it have to be
him instead of me?

well, this isn't what I expected
and life shouldn't
be this way
from the outside lookin in
it looks like i could win
but I'm rejected

am I so easy to walk away from
no-one stays I'm
feelin like a big mistake
now it's gettin hard to see
the point of me
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this a number of years ago thinkin of my oldest brother micheal who died at birth. 'nuff said.
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akpauly

Lover Bleed

we ran so fast -ya know we couldn't slow down
we flew so high - we couldn't see the ground
we fell so hard and it isn't right
we're far apart, I think I might

have been dreaming. was I just dreamin?
on sunday...sunday morning

I wrote a note, ya know I tried to say
I love you so I gotta get away
I'll find you when you find yourself
and this is real, I think, or else...

I was dreaming...just dreamin...
on sunday...sunday morning

out on a limb, cut away the excess
he's a knight, she's a train-wreck - a big mess
lost sight of what you really need
so take a bite, and watch your lover bleed

so line them up, and knock them down
light it up, let's leave the ground
we're out of luck, you know we're out of time
so shut your mouth and just be mine

we're dreamin, just dreaming
on sunday, sunday morning

out of the gate, but still in deep shit
up late - tryin to keep this
love alive what we really need
take a bite, watch your lover bleed
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
I knew someone last year. If things would have different, we may have been more than friends, as it was I became part of her support system as she tried to kick alchoholism. she was in a re-hab facility for 6 months. she did not.... that is to say..... I've heard rumors. one can try, but must walk away sometimes. some people you cannot help. she inspired a few songs. it's really sad, and tragic. I'd never dealt with that evil of an addiction. not like that. a learning experience, to be sure. some people are only in your life for a moment. like a shooting star, if you will. flash! zip! gone.
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akpauly

the truth

an original song by p. bruns. written in 2008, and recored in a little studio outside san angelo texas. on the c.d. titled 'simple'. thanks for reading.

I'm up late again.
feels like the sun went down 20 years ago.
it's like I'm waiting for someone.
I'm waiting for someone that I don't know.

I haven't met you yet, and I can't wait...

a sleepless night again
and the t.v. spews out noise - chaotic.
it's like I'm lookin for something
when I find it again I'll know I got it

I haven't found it yet, and I can't wait...

We'll go on and on. the world will fade.
time will pass, I'll serenade.
the flowers will bloom before our eyes
we'll daydream under moonlit skies.
on and on, and we'll have fun.
you'll be my girl, I'l tell everyone
someday we'll look back and see
the truth about the world
the truth about .... you and me.

I'm shaving the last 2 verses off. artistic lisence. :)
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
this was written for 'that girl' ya know. obvious. it kinda goes with the bottle of wine that my sis-in-law gave to me 7 years ago. 'save this for 'that girl' she said. I still have it. :)
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joe08234

"CAN I LOVE YOU?"

You won't let me love you,
It's ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

If you knew what you meant to me,
You would know we were meant to be,
But maybe I am wrong, unfortunately,
Not good enough, all along I couldn't see.

I only wanted to gain your trust,
But obviously, it wasn't enough,
What I wouldn't do, to feel your touch,
One more time, I miss you so much!

I did all I could, to keep you near,
I gave it my all, blood, sweat and tear,
Why you left me, still isn't clear,
A life without you, I truly fear!

You made me smile, and made me complete,
Only for awhile, but your loving was sweet,
It wasn't long, before you swept me off my feet,
With you I belong, without you I am beat.

You called me a cheater and a liar,
Eventhough you are my only desire,
You are my heart, my soul, my fire,
I love you to death, until I expire.

You won't let me love you,
It's ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

I tell you time and time again,
But I don't think you comprehend,
What I am feeling deep within,
And what I mean, it's a no-win.

I wish you would open your eyes,
Instead of feeding into men's lies,
I'm not like them, when will you realize?
Your heart I can mend, you'd be surprised!

I never hurt you, and never will,
But do I deserve you? I doubt it still,
The hole in your heart, I can refill,
Give me the okay, I'll start, real deal.

To take your hand in marriage,
Is my ideal life, living life lavish,
To make you my wife, all the rest I'd salvage,
Cause being with you, is all that matters!

I miss our talks,
I miss our walks,
Your presence still stalks,
My mind like the hawks.

You won't let me love you,
It's ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

Without you I'm nothing,
But with you I'm something,
No matter your assumptions,
Case closed, end of discussion.

You tell me you love me and care,
But I'm over here, and you're there,
I could shed a tear, this life unfair,
All I want is my dear, this life we shared.

Driving down this one-way road,
No turning back, I'm losing control,
I just want you back, that's all I know,
With each day that subtracts, another day untold.

Of what my future may hold,
Us together, growing old?
Us forever, or should I fold?
Leave you, never, you are my gold!

You are my treasure,
You are my pleasure,
And my endeavor,
Together life will get better.

But you won't let me love you,
It is ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

Can I love you?
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Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
LOVE POEM
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SarahR1983

Inside

The light goes dark,
and there is me,
a twisted creature that I see.
Cold penetrates the warmth of heat,
the drugs they seem to be so sweet.
A figure molds and makes anew,
it tells the host what it must do.
It knows the way of which to go,
the lights go dim here comes the show.
People know from which it came,
this feeling seems to have no name.
Dream and still there is another,
woven in sleeps dark dense cover.
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this about ten years ago, I write poetry when I need that release of pain, anger, the negative things that crawl around in your mind.
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Unknown

Home

There's a a place that I know
Outside of town
Theres a place that I go
Outside of town.
Over the mountain
Down a dusty ol' road
Under shade of tall trees
I drive real slow
To catch the cool breeze
And begin to unload
The cares of the day
Cuz I know that soon
Not far up the road
Is the pretty little place
That I call my home
There's a place that I know
Outside of town
There's a place that I go
Outside of town
Over the mountain
Down a dusty ole road
My sweetheart's a waitin
At the top of the hill
At the pretty little place
That I call my home
When I see her blue eyes
My heart goes to meltin
As I hold her and kiss her
And tell her I love her
She asks how my day went
I say alright I guess
But when I'm at home
Its always the best
Cuz there's a place that I know
Outside of town
There's a place that I go
Outside of town
Over the mountain
Down a dusty ole road
Is a pretty little place
That I call my home
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Posted: Jul 2012
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