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"Empty Spaces And Broken Parts" 7-8-09

I loved a girl
who didn't love me back
she was my whole world
but it was all a act

she had me think she was so sweet
but i turned her bad
like i tore off her wings
and broke her halo in half
but now i see
she was just a sociopath

and if i knew then what i know now
i would have never built my life around you
and would of never helped you tear it down

and in the end im better off wihout
you around
but the damage has been done
no i won't trust
another soul with my heart
cuz of you i don't feel much
except empty spaces
where these broken parts
fit once.....
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this song after i found out the girl i with for 12 years had been cheating on me, I thought we were cool still she was quite a good actress i suppose, still not sure what i did wrong.
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Unknown

"The After Thought Of A Start" 8-26-11

I can't give you the world
but i'd make you mine

and i can't always buy you exspensive things
like fine jewery
but you could wrap me around your finger
and for you i'd always shine

i could be
anytihg
just tell me
who you'd want

i can be
sensitve and so sweet
or confidant and strong

no i can't give you the world
but i'd fall for you like the stars
and for what it's worth
if anything
you could take my heart

i just wanna get to know you
to show you
i'm so much more
than first impressions might tell you
even before
the after thought of a start.....
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this song kinda as a promise that even if i'm not the richest guy out there i have alot to offer and my love could be priceless if given a chance.
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QuietStormF

There's No Always In Forever..

Not even going to say that I'm not sad
The time we spent together was the best I ever had.
I still feel your kisses ,I still feel your touch..
Yeh im gonna miss you, gonna miss you oh so much
Not even going to say, that i wont cry..
If i said I didn't still want you, well it'd be a lie,
But life goes on.. and baby so must we.
Guess that some things ,well they just arent meant to be.
Because there's no always in forever
And theres no solace in goodbye,
You cant stop the rain from falling down...
Even the roses have to die
And there's no happily ever after,
Not for most of us anyway..
And wishing upon the first star you see at night,
Is just not going to make them stay
So just go on,and move forward..
Try and move on..
And be thankful for the time that you had
Even though it's gone..
And though it seems that your whole world is falling apart...
Some day you'll look back on it without a broken heart..
Because there's no always in Forever..
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
I originally wrote this as a song, but alas I can't write music.. so although I have it in my head.. lol..
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Unknown

My lost love

I miss my heart when i walk on the road we walked, i kiss my pain when i hear your voice, i wish i was a cloud over your head atleast to follow you till dawn, and wish my day is just till dawn..
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Posted: Dec 2011
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Unknown

misplaced

So when do I find what I'am looking for
caught in a haze of promises, can't feel what's real or not
Promise me anything, and thats a lie
Don't even know what it is I want
So why should I even try


It's all so misplaced
How long will it take
When the dreams are all gone
How long till you wake

Don't know how I came to this
Just try n' figure out what to do
my hunt and search for greed
you think that I am lost
In a state of mind games, it seems like a check mate
None of us will win
And don't think that I can't wait


It's all so misplaced
How long will it take
When my dreams are all gone
How long till I wake

Bridge XA! It's all so misplaced


It's all so misplaced
How long will it take
When my dreams are all gone
How long till I wake

How long till you wake
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
why me why cant i be normal
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Unknown

their will awakes

when the winter was over
you'll return there to find me
and my memories filled you with light

you'll remember my beauty
you'll remember desire
as my memories filled you with light

i am the sun in the flame
cold from the flame turns away
and in these winds came a change
you'll awake...

Humans walk through these fields of delight
but I want you to know
desperation's the tenderest trap
so gently you go
what will it take
For their will to awake

when mans beautiful cults of desire
have left you for dead
isolation will cradle the lies
of things left unsaid
what will it take
for their will to awake

you'll look to the heavens above
and taste it's deceit
these temptations have blinded desires
to sleep at their feet
what will it take
for there will to awake

and I'll hear them call out your name
invoking the fates
chances are you've travelled too far
in stirring their hate
what will it take
nightmare awakes
their will awakes
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
i am in the mind
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Unknown

envy

Falling to darkness
Where the sky turns red.
It turns into stark features.
Letting you wish you would live.
You wish you would live.

They're alive, die as I space you. That's where I seize the spell.
The devil loves the pain. Encircle victims, breath the pain.
Buried fears, weak the soul. No more to you, now you're set in stone.
Bowing at your feeds and thoughts. Cold winter freezing
solid, with your fights falling when. He hears voices say," Tall toys gone."
Fell aside with heaps of fear. Dreaded calls springs in year. One attacks
himself from them. Feel your own spirit, a spirit say Say, "Timeout in your
life." What's wrong? You're wrong. We're set in stone.

Because life isn't fair.
Because the chance abound there.
Inside, souls are searching for.
Outside, the pain can't be ignored.

All around lives are the cost.
The fight is yours, terrorized cities lost.
Your world, with permanent thoughts of hate.
With their rights, die.
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
the pain of truth
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Unknown

Death Dealer

Wait a minute, where did the path go,
u stepped off the trail,
for a moment now its gone.
You're lost, the woods close around you,
It'is gettn dark can it be evening already.
What was that noise that rustling sound,
that growl, its not so nice out here anymore,
perhaps u think you shouldnt have come here,
there's things in the dark,
things that wait to grab and eat you.
chorus
I've watched this world
from shadows afar,
contributed fetishes, moots
and kaerns,
despoiled justice for things i ve done,
silhouettes of zombies come.
verse
Dark glow of the new moon,
inks shadows on the street,
meandering visages slither before succumbing,
To my dark gaze, grinning happily,
Darkness blurs them now,
they walk with respect, around me how,
treading lightly fearing the rage of my howl.
repeat chorus
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
unfinised song lol
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ru4eva

+ Sidewayz +

In Memory of a young and beautiful women...

One day ago you walked this earth
Is this what life was really worth

Kind and caring
Also sharing
Thoughtlessness, with no one hearing
Electrifying and very dearing

She ask me to take her away
But my morals got in the way

Farewell my friend
I'll see you in the end.

Embedded image from another site
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
She cut and slash her rists the frist times, then she took a rope and ended her life, all she wanted was out of her relationship.
My morals, single women only, but for this women I should have made an exception and took her from her hell.
My message, if you see its not right, do something about it, it will help and save a life.
The frist letters in the four sentences that are together, is her name.
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mcradloff

I'm your man

Call me good
Call me bad
Call me anything you want to baby
Cause I know that you're sad
And I'll give you the one thing that you never had
Cause baby
I'm your man
Don't you know that baby
I'm your man
You bet!
If you're gonna do it
Do it right
Do it with me!
Send some inspiration
Send some stimulation
I don't need you to care
I don't need you to understand
All I need is for you to be there
So I'm turned on
If you want me
I'm your man!
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
Thinking of song lyrics, and this one from Wham whammed into my head!
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