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optimisticme

You K now

Anger grows, noone knows,I hate how I feel, but twas pushed on me, something unreal,, that I cant see, to take what i am, to make me suberservent,, no,,,no,,,no,,,I refuse to be,,,, what they want want me to see,,,I wont or ever will be, I refuse,,, I refuse, why cant you see?,,,, Born to be lost,, but at what cost?It was never your destiny, you were ,,,you are,,, bound to be free,,,
xxxxxx
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Posted: Dec 2021
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optimisticme

Wondering

Im kinda of angry at life, its promise was more than it could be,,,I loved you more than I could see,,, wow,, aint that cool,, love poetry,,written like a fool,,just shows you what life means, anyone can say anything, hey,,, I love beans,,,or burger and chips,,, can I kiss you on the lips? Would you like a doner?,,, dont be a loner.... lets do this together,,,suddenly,, we are together forever!
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Posted: Dec 2021
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optimisticme

Its a who are we poem

A trillion years have come and gone, in all eternity it was not that long, gone in a blink, no time to think,, do we swim or do we sink?,,,are we too thin or did we get fatter,, who won the last game?,,, does it matter? Where we came from, we all want to know, created by friend or by foe?,, Are we an experiment of the alien kind? Lets look and see what we find.
So, there was a big bang suddenly,, out of nothing, well, that we can see, but it miraculously created you and me, not instantely, first we came from the sea,,,apperently,, then we grew arms and legs,,, now we can climb a tree,, dont know why that tree was there, hey, its only a story, lets be fair, lets not care, our prestigious leaders tell us its so,, who are we,, and what do we know?
Without their direction,, yes we would lose all connection, with the reality, of finality,, yes, they save us day by day, we need to listen to what they say.?????????
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Posted: Jan 2022
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optimisticme

Not

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Posted: Jan 2022
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optimisticme

Strange Life

Whats the meaning of a poem? Something noone can understand? A crypic message lost in meaning, for those that need it most, so we write words that only we can see, decipher it how it should be? I wonder why? Its not shakespere, its just how it is,, how it is here! So, this play on words, hey,, bird song, you are gone too long, so we wait for autumn and bird song, Or wonder why we exist,,, for what reason,,,lets make a list,,, we love it here,, the pain, the sorrow,, we look at the future, we look at the past, they died too young,,, didnt last, when you wake up as i hope you will, dont be a sheep, dont be still,,, take what it is,, take it home,you will realise that you are not alone!
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Posted: Jan 2022
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optimisticme

US

I find that life can f*ck you, leave you all alone,I never asked to be here, I never knew I would, I never changed my world, you came into my life miraculously as one that I could see, I fell in love, instantly ,,, and its always been,,, just you and me! xx
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Posted: Jan 2022
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DiggableHippy49

You Fool No One

I went for a ride,
I was probably high,
And I found myself here,-
I hear the sound of the band,
with a dollar in hand,
They gave me free beer,-

The barkeep said, "I like your song,"
"But in-between the lines you fool no one!"-
"But it has to be cool!",
"Playing it like old school!"-

The day became dim,
But then again,
How could I tell?-
I stepped into a room,
People mellowed in groove,
And I remembered that smell,-

The deadhead said has he passed his bong,
"In-between the lines you fool no one!"-
"But it has to be hip!"
"Striking that deep shit!"-

I walked back out on the floor,
What could be more?
She walked right in,-
Dressed in leather and lace,
That sweet smile on her face,
High-heeled sugar and sin,-

In the back- the band began to play a hit song,
"In-between the lines you fool no one!"-
The crowd went wild,
Jamming to acid rock style,-

She approached me,
Strutting her scene,
All the boys went crazy!-
Both our eyes met,
Take what you get,
Everything became hazy,-

And everyone sitting at the bar said,
"In-between the lines you fool no one!"-
And the sound- it changed,-
It sounded heavy!-

We talked until one,
Laughter and fun,
I felt we had something.-
We talked about plans,
How she needed a man,
Then I heard her phone ring,-

I heard someone say on her phone,
"In-between the lines you fool no one!"-
Before the band put up I did a solo,
The blues stopped by to say hello,---
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Posted: Mar 2022
About this poem:
3-8-2022 was when I wrote this one. I liked the idea of a rock/jazz sound that alters during the music styles, yet still keeps the same beat and tone.... Almost?
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optimisticme

Ostrich!

Wonderful thoughts create wonderful times, wonderful thoughts make easy rhymes, but thoughts of pain are not the same, oh, its soo hard to explain, can one person change the world? obviously so, greed for the gold!, the power to change the life we know, leave us ALL lost nowhere to go, can it happen, I don't know, but it should never be, I refuse to see, that ending, what it could be!
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Posted: Mar 2022
About this poem:
Ok,, sorry I cant talk right now, my head is in the sand!
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optimisticme

What?

Who knows? It's the question of all questions, I can't say nobody knows because then I would know that nobody knows, which means I would know, and I don't.

What's strange but true, our world revolves around me and you!
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Posted: Mar 2022
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optimisticme

Born to be!

The eternal quest to be better, be the best that you can be?, why not just be you?as good as you are? it will take you just as far, to the end, because my friend, no matter how good you are, it is still over in a blink, swim or sink, just be who you are, no matter how far, you want to go,, make it so,,, never look back, never rethink, onward is the way, .... be you,,,,,, no matter what they say!
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Posted: Mar 2022
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