jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 28, 2010
run now and always runs free,,what a flow and it flows freely ,,cool write serpico.thanks for sharing
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 28, 2010
hi jeddah you are more than welcome..thank you so much for your lovely comments..
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 28, 2010
it started a virtual radio in my head, so many songs about rivers, i got confused! it's heartwarming, this piece. thanks serpico. and i will leave you with lyrics from one of my favorite r.e.m. songs: Pick up here and chase the ride The river empties to the tide All of this is coming your way
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 28, 2010
gashly..i was thinking of the song from the western River of no return..lovely song..with this in my mind..i wrote the poem.. marilyn monroe and robert mitchum film.. thanks so much for your comments..i love all to do with water..must have been that first small babbling brook i saw..
My soul is a river It never stops it never ends i seek for love forever I seek for love that stands. My soul is a river It dreams, it hopes, it feels, My soul is a river that has no sides Just streams..
Nice poem..
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niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 28, 2010
I could hear the Welsh lilt in the title....and the ripple of the fast flowing river.... lovely Serpico, you took me for a walk through the valley's.... Niah
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 29, 2010
thanks keesy..nice poetic reply..your soul being the river..thanks for your nice comments
and niah thank you too...appreciate the replies..and its effect.. thanks both..
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 29, 2010
Beautiful serpico'..The way you blend the soul's theme into the debths of nature is extremely eloquent and very compelling..cafe'
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 29, 2010
thank you cafe..appreciate that..i always love rivers..wrote this with the tune from film river of no return in mind..late 50s film with marilyn monroe..
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Pick up here and chase the ride
The river empties to the tide
All of this is coming your way
marilyn monroe and robert mitchum film..
thanks so much for your comments..i love all to do with water..must have been that first small babbling brook i saw..
It never stops it never ends
i seek for love forever
I seek for love that stands.
My soul is a river
It dreams, it hopes, it feels,
My soul is a river that has no sides
Just streams..
Nice poem..
and niah thank you too...appreciate the replies..and its effect..
thanks both..