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Twilight Eyes

Twilight eyes about to go to sleep
pull your curtains on the world of light
who knows the secrets that you keep
are they blue or are they simply white

Twilight eyes soft and ever blue
hold the images of times best forgotten
can you sleep the whole night through
forget the past it was rotten

Once you walked the shady street
where a hundred faces only misused you
made you cold from head to feet
took the white and made it dark blue

It seems only God truly forgives
human nature may not always bend
we all need one who lets us live
with our soul made white not blue
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Posted: Feb 2011

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gnj4u
Hi, serpico12,
I love the color blue, though not to be seen through Twilight eyes, so sad. we all need one who lets us live with our soul ...so true! Thanks for sharing.
serpico12
hi gn thanks, for your added comment..kind of sad but its more observation..thanks..again..wave
niah9online today!
Clever write serpico....can't you learn so much from eyes....Niah
grin so best put my shades back on....cool rolling on the floor laughing
SCatlyn
Wow, beautifully written poem - thought-provoking. Love it!
bouquet teddybear bouquet
serpico12
hi niah..thanks so much..yes you can learn a lot from the eyes..they say the eyes are the gateway to the soul..lovely thought..thank you..so pop the shades on if you must..lol


aww scatlyn thank you so very much for loving my work..and saying so..its great to find someone who loves what i do...like others too, but you do stand out..and i appreciate your time to view and write...
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trurorobonline today!
very sad but a strong point made!
rob
serpico12
thanks rob..i was just imagining some people in life who have to live in the shadow of not being forgiven for past discressions..just a thought..thanks for viewing ..
Swan87
Humen Nature is to Ignore what good you've done in ur life And point at you once u do one mistake!

LOVED THIS POEM !! You Keep getting better and better !
a Wrtie that is full of emotions !
GrEaT JoB

Swan
serpico12
hi swan..and thank you for those kind words, yes you are so right..you can do 99 things right and 1 wrong..and its the wrong that is highlighted..
they do say to err is human and forgive divine..lot of truth in that..thanks again ...
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