Hi, serpico12, I love the color blue, though not to be seen through Twilight eyes, so sad. we all need one who lets us live with our soul ...so true! Thanks for sharing.
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 5, 2011
hi gn thanks, for your added comment..kind of sad but its more observation..thanks..again..
niah9Auckland, New ZealandFeb 5, 2011
Clever write serpico....can't you learn so much from eyes....Niah so best put my shades back on....
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 6, 2011
Wow, beautifully written poem - thought-provoking. Love it!
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 6, 2011
hi niah..thanks so much..yes you can learn a lot from the eyes..they say the eyes are the gateway to the soul..lovely thought..thank you..so pop the shades on if you must..lol
aww scatlyn thank you so very much for loving my work..and saying so..its great to find someone who loves what i do...like others too, but you do stand out..and i appreciate your time to view and write...
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 6, 2011
thanks rob..i was just imagining some people in life who have to live in the shadow of not being forgiven for past discressions..just a thought..thanks for viewing ..
Swan87Syria, QatarFeb 6, 2011
Humen Nature is to Ignore what good you've done in ur life And point at you once u do one mistake!
LOVED THIS POEM !! You Keep getting better and better ! a Wrtie that is full of emotions ! GrEaT JoB
Swan
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 6, 2011
hi swan..and thank you for those kind words, yes you are so right..you can do 99 things right and 1 wrong..and its the wrong that is highlighted.. they do say to err is human and forgive divine..lot of truth in that..thanks again ...
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I love the color blue, though not to be seen through Twilight eyes, so sad. we all need one who lets us live with our soul ...so true! Thanks for sharing.
so best put my shades back on....
aww scatlyn thank you so very much for loving my work..and saying so..its great to find someone who loves what i do...like others too, but you do stand out..and i appreciate your time to view and write...
rob
LOVED THIS POEM !! You Keep getting better and better !
a Wrtie that is full of emotions !
GrEaT JoB
Swan
they do say to err is human and forgive divine..lot of truth in that..thanks again ...