Love is a melody with words to you just, like a candle with flame so blue there in each moment of love she shines until we meet again girl and taste the wine
soft are her kisses smooth is her face no lines i find there none do i trace bathed in sweet beauty a one true love way past the twelfth of never and clouds above
Baby if you could but see how much i love you pulling me apart inside on times to view love with its aching no relief but you tis the twelfth of never when i will kiss you
I feel the essence of this poem,the beauty and heartfelt love.... I love the line that says....until we meet again girl,and taste the wine...great sentiment...
ng970
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJan 5, 2011
Good to see you back young man.....Happy New Year.....Andrew...
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 5, 2011
Lovely sensitive write Serpico.....I always loved that song...Niah
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 6, 2011
hi folks and many thanks for the kind comments..and andrew thank you too, nice to be back...happy new year to you and all others here...serpico 12
beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 6, 2011
Forever love.. beautiful serpico.
So nice to have you back!
You've been missed
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 7, 2011
thank you beautifulu...for the comments and the welcome back..that was kind to say thank you..
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 7, 2011
I never cease to be amazed at your poetry, Serpico. So much captured here. " ...pulling me apart inside, on times to view, love with its aching, no relief but you" - wow, the aspects of love contained in just these lines... Entire poem is beautiful! Great writing
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 7, 2011
wow what a tender and warm comment scatlyn...to see my poems carry such momentum and that you are so moved by them, is amazing, makes a writer see how his work can touch people..thank you ....so much...beautiful comments..
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I love the line that says....until we meet again girl,and taste the wine...great sentiment...
ng970
So nice to have you back!
You've been missed
" ...pulling me apart inside, on times to view, love with its aching, no relief but you" - wow, the aspects of love contained in just these lines...
Entire poem is beautiful! Great writing