What A Cuuuuuuuuuuuuttttteeeeeeeeeee Pupppppyyyyy I love it ..Made me smile Thanx alot for a great write
Swan
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 2, 2010
thanks swan..glad you liked it..appreciate your comments...
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 2, 2010
hi redex.thanks..my trip into the pet world..this image was a must to write on..
niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 3, 2010
Oh Serpico...wonderful and so different to your usual poems...I was giggling all the time...Niah's brother a brindle GreatDane black base rusty markings made him a pet no show dog. Oban was handsome and gentle. Let off the lead to run on a beautiful Bay of Islands beach, he broke away from the pack, and galloped up the beach to where I stood with wagon door ready and open for him to dive inside to safety....with me. This poem reminded me so much of him..thank you. Niah
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 3, 2010
Aww... you're a cute dog. I guess you're feelin like a "nerddog". But learning to swim is a good thing(being a dog, won't take you long til you're "dog-paddling"). Then you won't have to worry bout your street cred or getting a date... oh, you're just too funny Your sense of humor & way with words... here I am, a human writing to you Don't worry, you won't have to wear that contraption forever(specially if you keep up that strategy lying where they trip over you til every time you have to wear it... oh, and that's a thought. Maybe they're going to teach you to snowski. Then you can find any snobby girl dogs who made fun of you, and play that video for them, "How do you like me now?". Poor thing.... super, barking hostile mad... but it'll be worth it!
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 3, 2010
hi niah..glad you found it funny..thanks for the comments.
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 3, 2010
hi scatlyn..you have caught the essence of the poem..a down dog look..if only he could read he would value your comments..like i do..thanks a lot for the input..
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 6, 2010
You're just too cute! Thought I needed to visit you again. See the polar bear... he already knows how to swim. (So don't worry if the other dogs on the block or nearby park laugh at you... you'll be swimming & snowskiing just like the bear, in no time... and won't need the goggles anymore.) ... even if you had to wear goggles all day, like I wear glasses, you're still very cool-"street cred", "landing a date" - what a way with words! Yep, very cool, cuz you're so much fun!!
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 6, 2010
very good reply scatlyn..you have the gift of adding some good humor in your replies..you really should try some poetry from your viewpoint..you handle the dog and the polar bear subject with fun..and cleverness...good replies...
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 24, 2011
Well.... ok, Serpico12. I'll try, one time - guess it should be about animals(and short, since I'm not a poet, & Never did I ever consider writing one on a public forum ) For you, Dog- here goes... I'll practice what I preach
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 24, 2011
hi scatlyn..hey does that mean we can see a poem coming soon...thanks for your viewing this pet one..again..you are spoiling him with all that attention..lol...thanks
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 25, 2011
Actually, it's already here (and I like spoiling Dog; besides, I needed to show him I wasn't all talk & no action- I had to be brave! )
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 25, 2011
hi scatlyn my mistake you got one on here and its a great opening one for you..so i wont Horse about, just Trot out this response. thanks again for reminding me...
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I love it ..Made me smile
Thanx alot for a great write
Swan
This poem reminded me so much of him..thank you. Niah
Then you won't have to worry bout your street cred or getting a date... oh, you're just too funny Your sense of humor & way with words... here I am, a human writing to you Don't worry, you won't have to wear that contraption forever(specially if you keep up that strategy lying where they trip over you til every time you have to wear it... oh, and that's a thought. Maybe they're going to teach you to snowski. Then you can find any snobby girl dogs who made fun of you, and play that video for them, "How do you like me now?".
Poor thing.... super, barking hostile mad... but it'll be worth it!
(BTW-great writing & hilarious, "thoughtful" poem, Serpico!!)
... even if you had to wear goggles all day, like I wear glasses, you're still very cool-"street cred", "landing a date" - what a way with words! Yep, very cool, cuz you're so much fun!!
For you, Dog- here goes... I'll practice what I preach