Fallen Acorn from a tree above to the river below Drifting down stream To the ocean it will go
Get's caught on a branch from a fallen tree in the river it will be Dancing around for a day or two it finally breaks free.
Drifting down stream it will go wild waves taking it to sea. A quarry of rocks it will stop dancing around it can't break free, for a week or two Brushing the rocks it cannot stop for a week or two
Wild waves pushes it free on it's way to the sea. It's finally free To the ocean it will be.
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
The day we leave home is the fallen acorn from it's tree the branches it gets caught the quary of rocks are the roadblocks we face in life trying to have a clean, free path to our end.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 2, 2010
Very eloquently told story kickit.. It reminds me of all the starts and stops in life before we're released to the wiles of the ocean.. mellow'.. Cafe'
That is the Idea I was trying to send out. No matter how long were caught in a situation sooner or later we can break free. Thank you cafetwo for seeing it the way it was suppose to be seen.
very funny Mike I also might add to watch out for the poachers.
Jeddah what can I say bout you. Your so sweet with the comments you make the poems you write. Thank you for you.
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 3, 2010
dont have to sayanything about me kit,,i love your poem thats it,,iam just a couch potato lol...just keep sharing your poems for us to read as you do to us,yah,,,takecare and a blessed day always
Oh Jeddah if you look above your first posted comment and read mine you will see where I did respond to you. I'm sorry for any confusion. Thank you Again for your comments Jedda I'm so privlidged that you loved my writting with the talent as yourself have as a poet. Take care Blessed day to you also. kit
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Jeddah what can I say bout you. Your so sweet with the comments you make the poems you write. Thank you for you.
Yes indeed no matter how hard it gets always keep up that fight.