Natural Disasters

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Nov 2010 578 Views 8 comments

Natural Disasters

Dark sky and a huricane eye
A twister in the night
A tsunami it's gonna be
running away you can't escape
a tornado you must defeat
underground you must go
but an earthquake shakes your feet.
Snow falls an avalanch rolls
mudslide in paradise takes behold
volcano blows where will you go
lightning strikes fire burns through the night
smoke in the air. causes you to choke
open your eyes and realize
you fell a sleep in a jetted hot tub

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Posted: Nov 2010

About this poem:

Oh our imaginations running wild when were so tired the fire burning through the night is the candles burning. snow falling an avalanch rolls little water drop you have on your eye lid when it falls off lightning strikes is the sharp pains you get in your legs when they been over worked.the rest speaks for itself..lol

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Comments (8)

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandNov 4, 2010

THATS BRILLIANT, I WAS AWAITING A DRAMATIC MESSAGE AT THE END, REALLY INVENTIVE KICKIT

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKNov 4, 2010

Very imaginative, thanks Kickit, I enjoyed the read.....Andrew

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 4, 2010

Thank you Mike
Thank you Andrew

My original idea when I thought about the huricane eye was indeed intended to have a dramatic ending couldn't get the words right. I thought bout other ways I could use that's what i came out with.

Appreciate both of your generous comments

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 4, 2010

Great kick.' Made me feel like there was no place to run. No place to hide from natures wrath..cafe

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 4, 2010

sometimes it sure does feel like there is no place to escape. the world crashing down then realize it's our own false reality. like waking up in a jetted hot tub.

Thank you cafe for reading and sharing your thoughts.

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 4, 2010

you forgot to mention there,luckily you never get drown on that tub

excellent and wonderful way to put words on all the natural calamities but you end up just getting drown on your bathtub

well done too kit,takecare.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 4, 2010

Hi, kickit22,
Sometimes we wake up in life disoriented - not knowing where we've been, where we are, nor how we got there. If we are lucky we survive the natural and unnatural disasters! Like an avalanche, your poem rolls to eyes opened wide!

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 4, 2010

Your absolutley correct Gnj4U life can be disorienting. when everything comes at us at the same time. the human spirit is amazing on how much we go through in life and still strive to do our best no matter how bad it gets. there are some that can't survive. but the majority can and does survive. Thank you for your insight