End

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Nov 2010 531 Views 7 comments

The End.

I'm in a trap
It's been a blast
i knew it wouldn't last
i have to go
if you don't know
this is my last
I have no way
my time is up
i;ll be living my life
as my first post says
i can't explain
i'm a shamed
it has a grip
it won't let go.
i have lost
never to be the same

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Posted: Nov 2010

About this poem:

i have lost control of my life. i need to figure it out. my heart is empty. my last posted poem.

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Comments (7)

niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 18, 2010

I enjoy your poems kickit22...PC wouldn't be the same without you...Niah...

ginger1959Kingston, Ontario CanadaNov 19, 2010

kickit22....

never give up, been there, you will get through this I promise!!!

Your poem is reaching..people care, they do...keep writing!!!!!

Truly,
Ginger

KEEP WRITING YOUR POETRY IT IS GOOD!!!!!

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 19, 2010

sad to hear that it would be your last dear,,you wil be back and we are still hear to welcome you and wish you all the best on your life kit,,may you find the right one to fill that empty heart in your life,all my best wishes,,get a grip of a good life,,nice poem

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKNov 19, 2010

Take care Kickit......Andrew

HotrodLarrysSt. Joseph, Missouri USANov 19, 2010

Take time to Heal
live for today
Tho not a Thrill
just Allways Pray

You will find the One
It May take time
so work on self
Is not a Crime

Prepare Yourself
Clean up the past
New days will come
Its Not the Last

So, Smile inside
It Really Shows
thats what the next one
Will want to know..

Heartfelt, and many of us feel the same,
we must go on, Dont be in Shame...

Hotrod

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 19, 2010

wow,hotrod..you made me stopby again here,

that was a very inspiring poem and hope our friend kit will find his inspiration thru this encouraging poem of yours

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 19, 2010

If you had lost control, you would not have such awareness/perception. What happens is things do not go as we would consciously wish and it's distressing. Here on Earth is where we are allowed to get things wrong, to mess it up and it's ok. You are shadow and light, both are of equal value, they are you. As I write, 'Perception of the All in One'is drifting into my mind; try googling it as it may help you.
Email me if you want to,
CJ

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