freedom?

my life's over
it's like it never begun
I ain't havin' no more fun
no field green of clover

she left me
I'm here, just left all alone
as if the sun never shone
don't feel so free

what to do now?
can't walk, just where do I step?
can't think, ain't got any pep
I just don't know how

am I dead?
in a place, I never been
all is lost in all this din
rollin' through my head

please bring me around
should I get to a place that I know
like where all the waters flow
so that I may drown

way down under
far below this world of strife
it's time to end this life
that's been torn asunder

hey, do you feel like me?
now, that there's no feeling at all
can you hear my lonesome call?
if not, I guess I'm free
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2011

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Tithonus
You've got a baby's heart, truthful and pure, despite your age. I hope you'll remain forever within this love's bounds, unfree! Your sudden appearances to tell us of your innocent plights always brings tears to my eyes. I wish you both, now, adult's wisdom!
niah9
Hell hedistuff....I'm getting worried and confused....they seem so true...yet surely you are happy as.....good character write if that's still true....confused teddybear Niah
Earlgreytea
i echo Niah, hope this is just a publicity stunt on your part? i'm sure it is, good for you! excellent as usual!!!applause
hedistuff
tank you tith, niah, earl...love you too...
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