by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA
Apr 2011 638 Views 13 comments
Miracle Cure (scared straight)
don't stop light it up
here's a miracle cure
no hell no spells
no withdrawls guaranteed
millions of people are cured
you'll quit like millions of people did
smoke it up
black coat your lungs
smoke in your veins
don't worry cough it up
just tar in your heart
replace it don't be afraid
smoke four packs a day
you'll quit like millions of people did
now you got cancer but don't worry
we got a miracle cure
light it up
coat your lungs
smoke in your veins
tar in your heart
now your on your last breath
get some paper
crinkle it up
light it up one more time
now your eyes are closed one last time
air escapes your body
arm falls in that crinkled paper
that lit cigerette
burning paper
ashes you turn
see you quit and cancer free
like millions of people did
it's the miracle cure
here's a miracle cure
no hell no spells
no withdrawls guaranteed
millions of people are cured
you'll quit like millions of people did
smoke it up
black coat your lungs
smoke in your veins
don't worry cough it up
just tar in your heart
replace it don't be afraid
smoke four packs a day
you'll quit like millions of people did
now you got cancer but don't worry
we got a miracle cure
light it up
coat your lungs
smoke in your veins
tar in your heart
now your on your last breath
get some paper
crinkle it up
light it up one more time
now your eyes are closed one last time
air escapes your body
arm falls in that crinkled paper
that lit cigerette
burning paper
ashes you turn
see you quit and cancer free
like millions of people did
it's the miracle cure
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
millions of people die from smoking cigeretts one of the hardest habits to breaki smoked 18 yrs 6yrs now i quit before i found that miracle cure.
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Comments (13)
all i can say is
THANK YOU.
kickit.
Being a smoker, your poem made me stop and look in the mirror.
Scary but true.
it's not the easiest thing to do. i know i have done it took me a year to quit. but you know something it remains the single most important thing i'v done in my life.
wish you the best my friend in whatever you decide.
a fantastic advice and well written kit..very well done,,a good tribute to those who cant stop...one day i will smoke too
( big tobacco )
your right there is so much information out now about the cause and effect. thanks for your comment..kickit
A superb write.::handshake:
Never seen a machine like that but ya that would do it for me don't think i would have started if i saw that. thank you for your sharing dear.
congrats too you to for making that effort and putting the flame out. best wishes too you on your smoke free life.
it is hard losing somebody from this horrible preventable act. the long drawn out suffering that takes place to the last breath it is so hard on family friends that witness someone going through this. thoughts and prayers are with you.
thank you for your comment well appreciated.