by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA
May 2011 542 Views 17 comments
40 years
tv is on remote in my hand
sitten on a couch
late at night
the day I met you
heart was skipping
hands were shaking
candles were burning
flames were dancing
to the music that was on
made you a dinner
I do remember
pretty eyes angels smile
I fell in love with you
took my hand
looked in my eyes
and said yes i will
we were dancing
to the music that was on
walking down the isle
saying our I do's
tear down my face
tv goes blank
tape comes to an end
turning off the lights
going to bed
heart is skipping
hands a shaking
40 years
I'm still saying
I LOVE YOU
sitten on a couch
late at night
the day I met you
heart was skipping
hands were shaking
candles were burning
flames were dancing
to the music that was on
made you a dinner
I do remember
pretty eyes angels smile
I fell in love with you
took my hand
looked in my eyes
and said yes i will
we were dancing
to the music that was on
walking down the isle
saying our I do's
tear down my face
tv goes blank
tape comes to an end
turning off the lights
going to bed
heart is skipping
hands a shaking
40 years
I'm still saying
I LOVE YOU
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2011
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Comments (17)
Such a tender write. It is a wonderful dream to want love to last through the years and even better when it's one's reality. Sweet dreams until those dreams become reality!
I enjoyed your poem. I feel we all have that same longing. I know I do. I guess we have to be patient and have hope. I'm sure as kind as you are that it won't be long now. Take good care.
gnj4,mike,niah,boyshchrm,macduff and of course pinkpoetress. all your comments are all appreciated.
thank you my friend.
Thank you my friend for that wonderful comment.
Great expression!! In my case... I'd be lucky to experience 40 years with the love of my life... that'd put me at nearly 93 years of age.... however... if love was THAT sweet... I think I'd enjoy sticking around another 40 years!! Good job Kickit!!!
good luck and keep up
warm,romantic and a heart kickin'poem..love it..
thanks for sharing it
howdy stranger glad you were able to pop in havent seen you around in while dear. miss your poems and comments hon. hope to hear more of you. thank you for stopping in and commenting. don']t be a stranger your right lucky guy he is.
heeehee
I think it's romantic... ^___^ XX
40 yrs I m still saying I love you. 41 yrs I'll walk away from you?
Loved it. ^___^ Indeed.... just haven't had a chance to leave a comment.. here I am! LOVED IT TONS!
^___^ See you later in 40 yrs!
you might leave at 41 yr but 42 year you would come back
anybody you choose for yourself will be a lucky man haven a sweet lady like you.