by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA
May 2011 609 Views 17 comments
ANGELS
humans we are
mesmerized by the
lights in the sky
streaming across the sky
falling star some might say
aliens ship some might say
space junk some might say
a sattelite some might say
the real answer
is
angels in heaven
looking down below
watching humans
playing games
football baseball
soccer basketball
angels formed teams
heavenly angels
hells angels
they are playing a game
one of their own
it's not
football soccer or even basketball
but they are playing
astroids.
hells angels tryen to destroy earth
heavenly angels defending earth
wish apon an angel not a star
if you see one falling
the heavens just have won.
mesmerized by the
lights in the sky
streaming across the sky
falling star some might say
aliens ship some might say
space junk some might say
a sattelite some might say
the real answer
is
angels in heaven
looking down below
watching humans
playing games
football baseball
soccer basketball
angels formed teams
heavenly angels
hells angels
they are playing a game
one of their own
it's not
football soccer or even basketball
but they are playing
astroids.
hells angels tryen to destroy earth
heavenly angels defending earth
wish apon an angel not a star
if you see one falling
the heavens just have won.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2011
About this poem:
hope this write came out good. but this was a little joke i told my brother tried to put it in a poem don't know if this worked or not as a poem.Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.
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Comments (17)
find that angel along the milkyway,,just peeping at you,lol...
a fine write and keep "em coming...
thank you dear jeddah.
i know they got an eye on you also hon.
I'm glad that God knows the end from the beginning, and that Christ declared that we are to... "Be of Good Cheer for HE has overcome the world!!" (John 14:6 I believe?).
Pretty difficult poem to write!! I'm wondering... how long did it take to write it?
Heaven: 16,265,189,047,337,326
Hell: 16,265,189,047,337,128
a close match...
the idea been lingering in my mind for a month or so. thinking about how angels spend their time what it is really like in heaven. just for the fun of it i was imagining the good and bad throwing astroids at each other and the earth that the shooting lights we see is the actual throwing of astroids. having all those thoughts never really thought about making it into a poem until i was on here getting bored so i thought i'd see where i could take this when i actually started writing this only spent no more then half hour of actual writing the ideas were all ready there just how i was gonna piece it together.
kickit.
Wish I could have played a commercial to keep you even more in suspence like a cliff hanger on a tv series.
yes i would have done that if i could.
kickit.
This is just the stuff that comes to my mind not much else for me to do when i'm driving across this country just away to entertain myself glad i'm able to share these thoughts with you all.
kickit..
They do help us in many ways doing God's will to ensure that the ultimate plan will be seen through.
kickit.
that was too funny but I have given this a thought actually while i was writting this piece the score i came out with is actually.
kickit.
The imagination would be a terrible thing to waste. Thank you for sharing yours with us! Loved the score. All those 7s put new meaning into 7 times 70!
thought this just a little went away from my normal style it kinda felt like it did. so i just didn't know if it would work. thank you for your feedback.
and
thank you for your elegant comments you leave not just here but everybody who you comment on/.
kickit.
as we here on earth doing our own things thinking that money and power is everything the angels above are saying amongst themselves oh you humans don't no what power is you just wait. we are in for it i tell ya. scary yes but comforting to know that there will be an end to our own self destruction humans just can't no longer continue treating each other this way in which people do. there just has to be an end. thank you for stopping in my friend.