dream vs reality

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Jun 2011 434 Views 8 comments

dream vs. reality.

layen on my bed
in the moon light
waking up on the dark side
with closed eyes
felt the need to go take a pee
looken for a restroom
but found a bathroom
peeing in a comode
tryen to flush but the water
won't rush
laying in bed
with the sunlight
waking up to the light side
with opened eyes
feeling all wet
oh no i thought that it was just
A dream.

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Posted: Jun 2011

About this poem:

LOL.. dream vs. reality. that's all i can say.

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Comments (8)

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJun 6, 2011

lol....imagine laying next to someone else who does this ....and waking up at 3am....in a small puddle ....then stumbling to change the sheets!....ah....the good ole days :)

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 6, 2011

ohhh jazzy i think i'll leave that imagination alone. that' be one dream hope nobody would experience.

kickit.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 7, 2011

must be loosing it.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAJun 26, 2011

I liked the title. You know girls will not be lining up to spend the night with you if they read this. It will kind of dampen their spirits

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 26, 2011

too funny HGL

your right about that i wouldn't lay down with myself either.

these are just words to read for entertainment purposes only.

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJun 26, 2011

you made us laugh, thank you...

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 26, 2011

me thinks you protest too much Kickit

just have less of this before you turn the lights out

Country47-, Oslo NorwayJun 26, 2011

oh me i realy geth a good laughter
think I see it all in front of me hahaha:))
yes it was a day best poem in such a sense of humor
must have been a hopeless way to wake up in a very uncomfortable