i will save the thoughts for tomorrow for yesterday i will cherish today as it becomes a distant memory keeping it safe i'll put it in a case sitting in the sands of time you will never leave my mind you will always be my one of a kind smiled with laughter then tears just took over while a red rose lays upon you your disappearing face leaving with such grace for today has come to sing you one last love song harps play hymmmms begin lowering you down to your final resting place Huuuummm hmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmm hummmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
it's a funeral trurorob. not a concert hall at the london square but your right i need some help with that and that is why i have recruited SAS. glad you liked it tho.
kickit.
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAJun 8, 2011
Very nice. I enjoyed this one. Thanks.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJun 8, 2011
touching, heartfelt eulogy, i hope it was only poetical for you love and light...
thank you EGT for your thoughtful concern it is intended to be a universal poem for any type of relationship with the deceased. like a halmark card. maybe i can sale this to them. would that devalue this poem. glad you liked it. kickit.
i know this wasn't the right choice of word too use but it was intended to be used as the acceptance of your volunteer request. i do apologize for that term.
by the way your voice speaks volumns in your poetry if one cannot hear that then there is no hope. you can be in my chorus anytime.
lol ok Id love to be ur chorus... But why you blush?
lol dun really understand English much but if you blush then me blush too.
blushing w/ you. Lol
again, loved the poem! If this's real not just a poem, you are such a wonderful guy!!! I want someone to love me forever like this. Love me till the last day. It s beautiful. ^__^ ( but I gotta find one when am still alive first. :p )
you will find someone to love and take care of you how can anybody resist you.
my parents were married till the day my dad passed so that is where i get me from is from them and their longevity. i do wish the same for me as they had in their's. so ya this poem is real. kickit.
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Freckles
beautiful poem.
hummmm hummmm hummmmmmm (I'll be your chorus) ^_^
thank you dear, glad you enjoyed the read. really appreciate your comment. kickit.
thank you SAS
really need the help my hymmms are deaf causing screeetches.
kickit.
rob
not a concert hall at the london square
but your right i need some help with that and that is why i have recruited SAS.
glad you liked it tho.
kickit.
love and light...
Rob said the hymn sounded boring cus he might have not heard my voice… so I will sing a lil bit louder (HMMMM---HMMMMM) Better? not too gloom?
PS. I think I can do it better if I sing in a wedding ceremony, a birthday party, or even in a concert hall at the London square.
it is intended to be a universal poem for any type of relationship with the deceased. like a halmark card. maybe i can sale this to them. would that devalue this poem. glad you liked it. kickit.
i know this wasn't the right choice of word too use but it was intended to be used as the acceptance of your volunteer request. i do apologize for that term.
by the way your voice speaks volumns in your poetry if one cannot hear that then there is no hope.
you can be in my chorus anytime.
kickit.
lol dun really understand English much but if you blush then me blush too.
blushing w/ you. Lol
again, loved the poem! If this's real not just a poem, you are such a wonderful guy!!! I want someone to love me forever like this. Love me till the last day. It s beautiful. ^__^ ( but I gotta find one when am still alive first. :p )
you will find someone to love and take care of you
how can anybody resist you.
my parents were married till the day my dad passed so that is where i get me from is from them and their longevity. i do wish the same for me as they had in their's. so ya this poem is real.
kickit.