never forget

i will save the thoughts for tomorrow
for yesterday i will cherish today
as it becomes a distant memory
keeping it safe i'll put it in a case
sitting in the sands of time
you will never leave my mind
you will always be my one of a kind
smiled with laughter then tears just took over
while a red rose lays upon you
your disappearing face leaving with such grace
for today has come to sing you one last love song
harps play hymmmms begin
lowering you down to your final resting place
Huuuummm hmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmm
mmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm
Hmmmmmmm hummmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
to the ones that we lay down for the final time.

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Comments (13)

Freckles123
So true are your words, loved this kickit, really enjoyed the read.
Freckles wine
thesunandthesea
hug

rose beautiful poem. rose

comfort

hummmm hummmm hummmmmmm purple heart (I'll be your chorus) ^_^
kickit22
Hi Freckles

thank you dear, glad you enjoyed the read. really appreciate your comment. wine kickit.
kickit22
yay yay

thank you SAS

really need the help my hymmms are deaf causing screeetches. laugh
hug

kickit.
trurorob
enjoyed the poem, but the hymn looked boring!
rob
kickit22
laugh it's a funeral trurorob.
not a concert hall at the london square
but your right i need some help with that and that is why i have recruited SAS.
glad you liked it tho.

kickit.
Pinkpoetress
Very nice. I enjoyed this one. Thanks.
Earlgreytea
touching, heartfelt eulogy, i hope it was only poetical for you
love and light...
thesunandthesea
Hey kickit, you don’t need to recruit me, I volunteer! flower I know you can’t do it till the end ‘cus you’re crying too.roll eyes :p…

Rob said the hymn sounded boring cus he might have not heard my voice… conversing so I will sing a lil bit louder (HMMMM---HMMMMM) Better? blushing not too gloom? grin

hug hug hug


PS. I think I can do it better if I sing in a wedding ceremony, a birthday party, or even in a concert hall at the London square. shimmy
kickit22
thank you EGT for your thoughtful concern
it is intended to be a universal poem for any type of relationship with the deceased. like a halmark card. maybe i can sale this to them. would that devalue this poem. dunno glad you liked it. kickit.
kickit22
dear SAS

i know this wasn't the right choice of word too use but it was intended to be used as the acceptance of your volunteer request. i do apologize for that term. bouquet comfort


by the way your voice speaks volumns in your poetry if one cannot hear that then there is no hope. angel
you can be in my chorus anytime. blushing

kickit.
thesunandthesea
lol ok Id love to be ur chorus... But why you blush? blushing

lol dun really understand English much but if you blush then me blush too. blushing blushing blushing

blushing w/ you. Lol blushing

flower

again, loved the poem! If this's real not just a poem, you are such a wonderful guy!!! I want someone to love me forever like this. Love me till the last day. It s beautiful. ^__^ ( but I gotta find one when am still alive first. :p ) blushing



flower
kickit22
oh i blush cause now i have you in my chorus. applause yay dancing yay

hug bouquet hug


heart wings heart wings

teddybear

you will find someone to love and take care of you
how can anybody resist you.

my parents were married till the day my dad passed so that is where i get me from is from them and their longevity. i do wish the same for me as they had in their's. so ya this poem is real.
kickit. flower
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