by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA
Jun 2011 557 Views 18 comments
breaking point
i'm haven a bad day to much pressure
ready to snap i'm all ready at that breaking point.
just maken mistakes left and right
my life's turned upside down
now i'm told to just erase them
start a new and forget the rest
so stupid of my mistakes
they say go to school
then you'll be the sharpest in the shed
but i'm so full of led
i have no hope i'm so dull
i can never be # 1
always # 2 for you
i'm always in the dark
accept when you want me to bleed
my life is full of stress
for i am gonna break in half
they even make fun of me
and call me names
you know what they call me?
they call me a
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PENCIL
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ready to snap i'm all ready at that breaking point.
just maken mistakes left and right
my life's turned upside down
now i'm told to just erase them
start a new and forget the rest
so stupid of my mistakes
they say go to school
then you'll be the sharpest in the shed
but i'm so full of led
i have no hope i'm so dull
i can never be # 1
always # 2 for you
i'm always in the dark
accept when you want me to bleed
my life is full of stress
for i am gonna break in half
they even make fun of me
and call me names
you know what they call me?
they call me a
oh your gonna love this scroll down
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PENCIL
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Posted: Jun 2011
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Comments (18)
FANTASTICALLY, HUMOROUSLY, ORIGINALLY - FIRST CLASS POEM my friend!!!
One little edit you could do.... the word you used for pencil led should be spelled 'lead'. (Sorry, I'm a nut for spelling!!!)
Loved this one Kickit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yea I am I guess too much time spending behind the wheel of this truck all that thinking time. so now i'm out of ideas on my next release so behind the wheel i'll be thinking..
that is great swade. that has got to be the most funniest hilarious comment and i might add a very generous, i have had on any of my poems. this will be without question the top 2 most favorite reactions. love it. thank you for reading. really glad you enjoyed it. but i will say
AHHHHHHHAAAAAAAHHHHHAAAAAA GOT YA......sorry had to do it my friend.
Thank You for a first class comment, reaction
p.s that part of spelling led instead of lead is actually been built in to this poem that it just to show the reader even if your the sharpest in the shed your not all that sharp.
but you my friend have pointed this out but missed the meaning. got ya again.
kickit.
to me that is an amazing incredible comment to have recieved. this type of a comment that is what i try to strive for in all my works. but it is so hard to write somethen different most of the styles techniques have been done.
just want to let you know i appreciate your comment. i will for sure savior this one you have sent me. for you to give up your viewed points for what you have set out too do wow that says everything. i couldn't even begin to say how that just hit me.
ok yo u can start eating crow and feathers now.
bottoms up.
kickit.
sorry didn't forget you. thank you for your comment. glad you liked it.
rob
glad you found this touching to your personal situation.
you know it's not so much that we fail to show our real self i believe it is more like people fail to see the person we really are for what its worth. to be referred to in an unflattering way is dishartning but you have to remember like you said you know you and who what your about as much as you want other people to see you the same way you see yourself is almost impossible people have all ready made up there minds of what they think is at first sight. once the mind is made up it is a tall task to change one's mind. kickit.
They say it's never too late. just honored to have you read my writing. no matter how many times it takes to go around. glad you enjoyed this comen from a great poet as yourself. thank you. kickit.
Ah sometimes I wish I could be that eraser for some of life past
Red is BACK
oh my gosh Red is back.
sorry dear got little excited when i saw you here welcome back dear. good to see ya again.
i was hoping you'd return before this got buried in the mountain of pc poems.
Very clever, indeed! Were ever there a PENCIL in need of an ERASER, this is it! Just remember, the mistakes left and right may go but the poem stays!
the left and write mistakes was for the right handed that makes the mistakes and the left handed that makes mistakes since i am left handed i had to throw that in. but without those mistakes i won't need my eraser and i need too keep my eraser. if you noticed that is why i misprinted the word led. suppose to be lead so my eraser can have an excuse to stay with me.