can I be your Sun and Sea thesunandthesea

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Jun 2011 449 Views 9 comments

can I be your Sun and Sea (thesunandthesea)

I am the Sun

I will shine on you

Take those glasses off I won't blind you

I am right here if you look over there

I am the Sun

You can be my Light

we can be two at flight

on a rainbow that is our delight

For I am the Sea

I will take you away

to my shores you will be

Promise you won't drown

I'll keep you on my ground.

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Posted: Jun 2011

About this poem:

me as thesunandthesea hope i made you proud.

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Comments (9)

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 11, 2011

your absolutly right that you have added the final touch thank you jazzy. guess putting on the makeup worked ah to feel like a wo man.

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAJun 11, 2011

YEAHHHHHH)))))))

U GOT IT!!! KICKIT!!!!

LOVED IT DEEPLY))) LOLOL FEEL LIKE I READ MY OWN POEM!!!

^__^ XXX

GREAT!!!! YOU ARE REALLY ME!!!

pS. the Yellow (theme) hurts my eyes a bit... lol SOoooooo Shineeeee))))

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 11, 2011

thank you bill your right i need little more stars in my sun.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 11, 2011

i got some glasses for you but if you don't like i will be sure to change the color don't want your eyes to give you headache. have to say it was cool being you for a moment in time just long as it not permenant cause there is only one of you.